Well Done

Neville

Well Done

 

I don’t want to be a cliché

or dance

with shadow children on

distant balconies ..

That’s not what balconies

are for now, is it ..

I want to sit and watch you

   read your kindle ..

While the sun goes down

and we both blister ..

Before that is, we each turn,

golden brown ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 31st, 2023 04:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Cassie58

    Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville 🙂

    • Neville



      I am hot under the collar just thinking back on it .. thank you Cassie .. 😎👍

    • orchidee

      With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.

      • Neville



        it seems you made your bed, so now you just have to lie in it .. the pair of you if there is a pair of you remind me a little bit of that old TV series Starkers & Hutch 🐀🐁🐭😎

        • orchidee

          Yes, boo hoo, I've made my nest, as a G/Pig, now got to lie in it. I will hibernate from KP.
          If I see her starkers I will never recover but will be scarred mentally for life. lol.

        • Thomas W Case

          Some fantastic lines here.

          • Neville



            Thank you both kindly and true TWC .. and here's me wishing you an amazing 2024

          • Goldfinch60

            I prefer my meat rare Neville.

            Andy

            • Neville



              I rarely partake these days but when I did, me too .. Neville



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