Well Done
I don’t want to be a cliché
or dance
with shadow children on
distant balconies ..
That’s not what balconies
are for now, is it ..
I want to sit and watch you
read your kindle ..
While the sun goes down
and we both blister ..
Before that is, we each turn,
golden brown ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: December 31st, 2023 04:01
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Holidays. Cooking nicely on the balcony. Plenty of heat here, sea view, sunset and drinks. Perfect harmony I reckon. A well done poem Neville 🙂
I am hot under the collar just thinking back on it .. thank you Cassie .. 😎👍
With that title I thought this was gonna be about you congratulating me for having spent another year (in agony) with KP! lol.
it seems you made your bed, so now you just have to lie in it .. the pair of you if there is a pair of you remind me a little bit of that old TV series Starkers & Hutch 🐀🐁🐭😎
Yes, boo hoo, I've made my nest, as a G/Pig, now got to lie in it. I will hibernate from KP.
If I see her starkers I will never recover but will be scarred mentally for life. lol.
Well N, somehow you knew what my reply to your little scribble here would be. Well done. Though I'd like to add "Very Well Done". 😜👍
Many & I do mean many big THANK YOU's AP & a happy, healthy & safe New Year to you and your gang .. Neville
🫂
Some fantastic lines here.
Thank you both kindly and true TWC .. and here's me wishing you an amazing 2024
I prefer my meat rare Neville.
Andy
I rarely partake these days but when I did, me too .. Neville
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