Haiku 4 Having Me She Said

Neville

Haiku 4 Having Me She Said

 

while widows may peek

and wives they do worry so

   young virgins wonder ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 1st, 2024 04:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: today, my embu is predominantly for the people of Japan, Gazza & the Ukraine ..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • 2781

    I can't touch that one.

    • Neville



      probably for the best really ..

    • Cassie58

      There is gratitude in your title. Probably much more elsewhere as well.

      Your embu should meet the approval of all those who deplore violence and suffering of any sort.

      Happy New Year Neville.

      • Neville



        Thank you Cassie .. I hope so & back at you .. Neville

      • orchidee

        KP said Haiku - she was sneezing in a foreign language! lol. (achoo!)

        • Neville



          Bless you KP

        • Parisab

          Impromptu imagery matching your powerful sentiments…

          • Neville



            Many thanks for considering my little scribble Parisab, your visits are always most welcome & I do so appreciate the encouragement & support .. All Good Things for our Newest of Years .. Neville

          • Bobby O

            I smiled and would not be able to explain how for the first time ever I used the word Haiku in a poem. I read this minutes after I posted. If I could ask John Cleese he might provide clarity?

            • Neville



              Great minds eh ..

            • Teddy.15

              lol 🤣 that's a great senryu made me chuckle 🤭

              • Neville



                Cheers Chuck 😎👍



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