The Checkout.

Goldfinch60



Shopping completed, almost;

The final hurdle left,

To run the gauntlet of the checkout.

Which member of staff will I have today?

 

I look for the shortest queue

And hope the till person is one I know,

And one with whom conversation is good;

Or non- existent.

 

The one today is the talker.

We start with the good mornings

And how are yous,  and then she is off;

Talking nineteen to the dozen!

 

I try to get an edgeways

To get a word in, but no,

The gaps just aren’t there

For me to utter even one syllable.

 

I just pack my shopping

Trying to look interested

Out of politeness, what’s the point?

She’s not looking, she is in her own world.

 

The one I like is the young lady

Who greets me with the brightest of smiles.

We chat while the shopping

Passes before me and into the bags.

 

I know she has a young one

Whom she obviously adores;

The smile is greater when she talks

Of her child.

 

There is the one who talks of birds,

She feeds the birds in her garden;

But is amazed at how many sultanas I buy

To feed those in mine.

 

The best one of all was a man

Who I sought out week after week;

We would talk of many things;

And came to know each other well.

 

A five minute conversation

Which seemed to continue each week

Without interruption, but was interspersed;

With seven day gaps.

 

Then comes the pain!

The shopping in the bags are in the trolley,

Ready to wheel to the car;

But they won’t let me go until I have paid!

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 2nd, 2024 02:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just off to The Isle of Wight for a few days.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 9
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  • orchidee

    In some shops I take basket (with wheels on) right thorough the checkout, and pack up my bags after paying.
    Occasionally, cashier says 'Please don't take basket out of the shop'. Understandable, as people leave trollies in the street, far from the shop.
    Another hazard is when a new till opens, and they all dash there, and we may be left in a long queue still. We can play 'Guess which till will open'. But a little patience won't hurt us.
    Could you pop in to see that prisoner on the IOW? He is being released in February - ooh!

    • Goldfinch60

      I always tke the shopping in the trolley to the car and unload it there!

      I popped in yesterday and saw him, he is fine. |LOL

      Andy

      • orchidee

        Thanks Gold. Yes, I expect he is fine, as he is getting out in early Feb.

      • Cassie58

        A reminder why I never use those self-service checkouts.. I am a people person and I enjoy the contact with a cashier. I like to see smiles and have a greeting when I pay for my shopping. Shopping day today. Good morning.

        • Goldfinch60

          No I never use the self service checkout, I don't get paid for doing their work!

          Andy

        • arqios

          At the check out today at the chemist’s was a larrikin at the till. Made for a pleasant errand and a light feeling at the beginning of 2024. Happy New Year!



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