We are flesh and flame
Burning brightly
Fluttered by the wind
Seized by the stars
Embers cascading
into ashes of time
Slowly entering twilight
Faith the sail of the soul
- Author: James Michael (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 2nd, 2024 22:34
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments1
“Into ashes of time”, really clever to tap into such an absolute to bring minds and meaning together , and THEN you took
A norm and added more, flutter seizing cascading motion, tactile action , and I swear, this was the closest I’ve come to
Picture ashes blinking like neon lamps colored like a rainbow
Thanks for such an interesting comment!
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