Walking The Beach,

Goldfinch60



For what more could I ask,

Here I was walking along the beach,

Holding my lover’s hand,

The sun shining down on us,

The weather nice and warm.

Looking out to sea,

The beauty of the sea,

The waves rolling in,

There crests rough and white

Coming towards us

Showing their beauty,

And the wonder of Nature.

Many may think this is fine

But it is so unusual,

Unusual on the third day,

The third day of January

In the middle of winter.

But here we were

Walking along the winter beach,

Our love shining,

Shining as bright as the sun.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2024 02:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: We just could not believe it, being able to walk in the sun along the beach in the middle of winter.
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 12
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Tom Dylan

    I really enjoyed this poem. On a miserable January morning, it was nice to read about the sun and beach. πŸ™‚

    • Goldfinch60

      Than you Tom, it was wonderful to be able to take that walk.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • arqios

      There beauty lay within the centre of love’s daily outworking; no matter the season, no matter the clime.

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true arqis, thank you.

        Andy

      • Accidental Poet

        Two Suns, Two lovers. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind and most true AP, thank you.

          Andy

        • Thomas W Case

          Great imagery and use of senses.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Thomas,

            Andy

          • Dev Parth

            Mind-blowing brother πŸ™
            Great picture πŸ–ΌοΈ I enjoyed it 😊
            Thank you for sharing with us πŸ™β˜ΊοΈ

            Dev

            • Goldfinch60

              Most kind Dev, thank you.

              Andy



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