For what more could I ask,
Here I was walking along the beach,
Holding my lover’s hand,
The sun shining down on us,
The weather nice and warm.
Looking out to sea,
The beauty of the sea,
The waves rolling in,
There crests rough and white
Coming towards us
Showing their beauty,
And the wonder of Nature.
Many may think this is fine
But it is so unusual,
Unusual on the third day,
The third day of January
In the middle of winter.
But here we were
Walking along the winter beach,
Our love shining,
Shining as bright as the sun.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2024 02:11
- Comment from author about the poem: We just could not believe it, being able to walk in the sun along the beach in the middle of winter.
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments6
I really enjoyed this poem. On a miserable January morning, it was nice to read about the sun and beach. 🙂
Than you Tom, it was wonderful to be able to take that walk.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi,
There beauty lay within the centre of love’s daily outworking; no matter the season, no matter the clime.
So very true arqis, thank you.
Andy
Two Suns, Two lovers. 😉👍
Most kind and most true AP, thank you.
Andy
Great imagery and use of senses.
Thank you Thomas,
Andy
Mind-blowing brother 🙏
Great picture 🖼️ I enjoyed it 😊
Thank you for sharing with us 🙏☺️
Dev
Most kind Dev, thank you.
Andy
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