In a world that leaves me feeling deflated and disappointed
I refuse to believe that this is my lot in life
sometimes I close my eyes
imagining my very own imagery
I can see the sunflowers smiling in the meadows
streaming with light
in that one crucial moment
when the sun finally beams onto their sleeping faces
waking them with a start every time
and the magnificent orchestra of birds singing their daily opera
reminding me i'm alive
and the very moment
the sun beams
reach the terracotta roof of the villa perched on the hill
almost as if it was protected by a warm glow
clouds moving fiercely
to the side
leaving fresh air to breathe
lavender perfuming the sky for all to savor
in a world that leaves me feeling
deflated and disappointed
I refuse to believe that this is my lot in life
I close my eyes and I imagine
I see, once again
the great deer, visit me in my back yard
just as he used too, many moons ago
Just as the sun was rising.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
So vivid, so beautiful, so you Teddy. Perfection in poetry. 😉👍
Forever grateful for such a comment from you my dear A.P thank you with all my heart. 🤗
🫂 Most welcome dear friend.
Another lovely poem. Some great imagery there. A really great poem, quite sad and reflective, yet uplifting at the same time.
Well poetry if nothing else should bring the reader emotion so I am most pleased you could feel it, yes sad as we don't take care of our beautiful planet and I wonder why. Uplifting well I had to bring you back up lol 😉 thank you dear Tom for your kind and very honest words.
A very soothing and peaceful image with so many nature pictures that are so identifiable. Lovely
Thank you so very kind dear sorenbarret.
DearTeddy, how I’ve missed your words of gold. This is a poem that fills the senses and quickens the heart. Your world of imagery is so real and beautiful, that I feel I'm there with you. Thank you for this journey into nature in all its glory, where hope springs eternal!
my dearest Bella, ive missed you too, i've been so busy of late but i'm always around my dear friend, always miss you too. i'm so very honoured you saw all this imagery and have come by to leave one of your gorgeous reviews. thank you dear friend. Happy New Year, with the biggest of hugs
Wrapping you up in the best of New Years wishes my friend!
Gathering all things of beauty in a basket for our eyes to see- great read!
Thank you so much dear Parisab 🤗
a very special memory teddy & what a privilege ..
Ah yes you've seen this scenery, such a pleasure to bring it all back to you my dear Nev. Thank you 💜
Beautiful imagery Teddy.
Hello dearest Tom, it's not hard to find, I live in Tuscany so I'm truly blessed with this gorgeous scenery 🤗 thank you.
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