You Can Always Tell ..

Neville

You Can Always Tell ..

I do love you,

she said ..

I love you too,

he replied ..

Well

okay then but,

I’m sure,

I love you

much more ..

Well

maybe just

lately,

you do he

sighed slow ..

And they

both roll over

and sleep

until morning ..

He facing

the window

and her,

facing the door ..

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Thomas W Case January 8th, 2024 07:35
What isn't said comes through loud and clear. Brilliant.
- NevilleJanuary 8th, 2024 07:41
  
  Thanks Thomas .. Much appreciated my friend .. Neville
orchidee January 8th, 2024 08:45
I of course can't always tell. Can I ever?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido.
- NevilleJanuary 8th, 2024 13:32
  
  Thanks to Fido her indoors is allowed a day off I see.
Tom Dylan January 8th, 2024 08:58
You've really captured the scene. The last line was just perfect.
- NevilleJanuary 8th, 2024 13:34
  
  How very kind of you Tom .. Many thanks indeed .. Neville
Cassie58 January 8th, 2024 14:15
This is a such a cool poem Neville. Yes, the scene captured perfectly.
- NevilleJanuary 8th, 2024 17:30
  
  Thanks Cassie, I owe you one 😎👍
Doggerel Dave January 8th, 2024 17:12
Reassurance sometimes obligatory.
- NevilleJanuary 8th, 2024 17:27
  
  .............. absobloominlutely
Teddy.15 January 9th, 2024 01:37
Capturing a scene with perfection. 🤗
- NevilleJanuary 9th, 2024 03:52
  
  for some inexplicable reason, I took the seen it route .. 🤪
Goldfinch60 January 9th, 2024 02:19
But they were still in the same bed Neville.

Andy
- NevilleJanuary 9th, 2024 03:48
  
  When there is nowhere left to turn, one is either forced to continue tossing, or make the most of it & turn the other cheek ..
  
  Neville

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