Together As One.

Goldfinch60



On this cold winter’s morn

We walk into town,

Hand in hand down the paths.

The sea of love that we have

Surrounds us as we walk.

Talking and laughing together,

Our life so wonderful.

We just do not know,

Do not know how it happened,

A widow and a widower

Becoming one again

After the losses in our lives.

They say that all love is different,

It certainly is for us,

So different from our lost loves,

But we accept it for what it is

And together we move forward,

Move forward into our beautiful life,

Our beautiful life together as one.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2024 02:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: We just do not understand where this love we have for each other came from.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 18
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Neville



    how lovely is that .. no need for an answer .. just deeply enjoy ..

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, we certainly do enjoy our life.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Yes - what Neville said..... πŸ™‚

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Fate it was always meant to be, no need to question this, enjoy every last minute you both were simply meant to be. Life has many twists and turns and with the grief then comes the happiness if you are very lucky and it is clear that you both are. 😊

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you for your wonderful words Teddy, yes we are very lucky.

          Andy

        • Doggerel Dave

          All my most loyal and supportive wishes, Sir. No need to waste precious time writing about it, just stay with it and enjoy. Don't question: there are no answers. You are the envy of many, as these pages testify on a daily basis.
          So all the very best, Andy

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you so much for your wonderfully kind words Dave, they are very much appreciated.

            Andy

          • Tom Dylan

            A lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Tom, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

              What all of us crave. Such a beautiful write.

              • Goldfinch60

                Much appreciated, thank you.

                Andy

              • Accidental Poet

                "I gave my life to become the person I am right now. Was it worth it?" - Richard Bach. Yes, for both of you it is definitely worth it. Beautiful write Andy. β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘

                • Goldfinch60

                  It certainly is worth it AP, thank you.

                  Andy

                • MendedFences27

                  Trying to capture love in words is like trying to capture a butterfly in a fishing net. Becoming lovers again is like being the caterpillar that changes to the butterfly, more beautiful than before. - Phil A.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    So very true Phil, this love we have is so different and so powerful. Thank you.

                    Andy

                  • Christina8

                    What a wonderful and heartfelt write!!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Most kind Christina, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Beauty. Excellent

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Thomas.

                        Andy



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