When known that one great spark
igniting the heart
where shallow endings
were once my greatest fear
now finely tuned
like the keys of a grand piano
brokenness that once was
now faded into forgotten.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2024 03:31
- Comment from author about the poem: Yes I am feeling slightly romantic. ❤️
- Category: Love
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Comments7
Wonderful loving words Teddy.
Andy
Hello dear Andy, thank you so much. 🤗
A beautiful poem that sinks to the depths of the soul and causes ripples that resound on the shores of memory
Oh my dear sorenbarret thank you so much.
"now faded into forgotten." Wouldn't take much to turn that into solid advice re lost love and all manner of discomforting experiences.
Wise words, Teddy.
Wow Dave, how well you have read this. Thank you and I'd also take this moment to wish you a very happy new year. 🤗
And you too (despite the state of the world.....)
So many great lines in a short poem. That one great spark, just perfect.
Thank you dear Tom, my favourite reflection is on Love and all it's different shapes. Thank you so much.
Wow! - Such beautiful words, describing the sensation of Love. A love poem to love. - Phil A.
Thank you so much dear Phil always so honoured to see you on my page sir, and such kind words you do write. 🤗 Thank you so much.
Just beautiful! Wonderful sentiment. Good to see you again!
Hello dear Christina8 thank you so much.
I just love it when you feel thus Babe 💛
LOL you know me well enough that what I love most about love is its twists and it's turns. 🤗
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