Days pass, yet there
is nothing to do.
All I can do is sit
here and think of you.
The snow rages on
I wish for summer instead
But the cold blankness just
makes me feel sad and dead
A part of me dies
every winter long
But I do love the cardinals
Belting out their songs
I feel detached of
everything going on
So taken for granted
This is no fun.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 10th, 2024 14:42
- Comment from author about the poem: Just my thoughts being stuck in a frozen tundra...
- Category: Sad
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Comments6
I love the allegorical feel of this poem. I can see the bleakness of winter while the loved one is absent, until he returns in spring, as does the Cardinal. Beautifully penned!
Thank you so much bella!! Very appreciated!
How is it in the USA just now? I'm in the UK.
northern states are having snow storms and southern states have rain and a few tornadoes.
We've not seen a few tornadoes here lately, and probably not as much snow as you're having.
Those cardinals will take you to a finer place in your mind Christina and life will get better.
Andy
I appreciate the kind words and uplifting thoughts!
Better days are on the way Christina. My Mother loved Cardinals too. Now she sings with them in Heaven. 🐦
yes, many think that cardinals are a symbol or a sign from heaven. Thank you for your kind words!
I am so glad you found your muse, or your muse found thee my very dear C .. I sincerely hope you warm up real soon .. Neville
Yes, hopefully my muse will inspire me and come up with some better poems, lol! Thanks for your kind comments!
Great to see a write from you Christina
Although tinged with sadness there is also hope from tha cardinals song
Keep em coming
Thanks for your wonderful comment, I have tried writing but nothing will rhyme....hope to see more of your poetry soon!
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