Deliciously Loving You

Thomas W Case



Deliciously loving you,
yet, I'm the
one that got ate up
and spit out.
So I lie on
an empty beach
like a broken sea shell,
while the lonely rain
pounds the sand.

  • Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 11th, 2024 22:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hey everyone, check out my book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems, on Amazon.com.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Lorenz

    Simply delicious !

  • Ellen Marsell

    That's brilliant!

  • Tom Dylan

    A good one with some brilliant lines.

  • Bobby O

    It’s a challenge to me to think I could make that trade though I honor those that could.

  • Cassie58

    A picture of lonely emerges here. I can picture this scenario. Sea shells should never be broken.

    • Thomas W Case

      Thanks for the review and read.

    • Teddy.15

      Sadly beautiful dear Thomas. A short peice full of emotion and imagery. Bravo.

      • Thomas W Case

        Thanks Tewddy, much appreciated.

      • Bella Shepard

        The empty beach is such a wonderful metaphor for the emptiness of lost love. A beautifully poignant piece my friend.

      • John

        Got you mate, feel for you, so sad but beautiful write

        • Thomas W Case

          Thank you so much for the read and comment.



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