Deliciously loving you,
yet, I'm the
one that got ate up
and spit out.
So I lie on
an empty beach
like a broken sea shell,
while the lonely rain
pounds the sand.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments8
Simply delicious !
Thanks
That's brilliant!
Thank you.
A good one with some brilliant lines.
Thanks Tom
It’s a challenge to me to think I could make that trade though I honor those that could.
Thank you.
A picture of lonely emerges here. I can picture this scenario. Sea shells should never be broken.
Thanks for the review and read.
Sadly beautiful dear Thomas. A short peice full of emotion and imagery. Bravo.
Thanks Tewddy, much appreciated.
The empty beach is such a wonderful metaphor for the emptiness of lost love. A beautifully poignant piece my friend.
Thank you very much
Got you mate, feel for you, so sad but beautiful write
Thank you so much for the read and comment.
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