On a clear night like this

Tom Dylan


Notice of absence from Tom Dylan
Sorry if there is a delay in responses. Sometimes life gets in the way. As John Lennon said, life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans.

On a clear night like this

 

The moon is glorious and white 

in the sky

the stars shine and sparkle

above the Tesco Extra

and the kebab shop

the milky white moon-glow

reflecting on the shutters

of the bookies

on the corner. 

  • Author: Tom Dylan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 15th, 2024 03:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes I think poems are a snapshot, trying to capture a moment, a feeling.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Eugene S.
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  • Doggerel Dave

    🥹Gentle irony, a picture well painted in words. I will have to see what else you've got...

    • Tom Dylan

      Thanks, Dave. Yeah there was a lovely clear sky last night, over the inner city street. Cheers, Tom.

    • Teddy.15

      Reminds me of home 💜 wonderful imagery I don't remember too many times I saw the open skies and the stars in London, but I will remember this.

      • Tom Dylan

        Thanks Teddy. Yeah, it was a lovely clear night, for a change. In Manchester we don't get many of those either. 🙂

      • Bella Shepard

        When you experience such a moment, no matter where, it is a gift. You describe the scene so beautifully that I can imagine all else around you fading into the background. Truly a lovely write!

        • Tom Dylan

          Yes, it was a lovely clear night. I came home and the moon and the starts over the urban setting stayed with me. Thanks for your comments. Really appreciated.

        • Neville


          That is precisely what poems are .. moments captured .. simple as that .. write on Tom .. Neville

          • Tom Dylan

            Thanks mate, appreciate your comments. I'm still finding my way with poetry, always been more of a short story writer. Cheers, Tom.

          • Eugene S.

            A vivid portrayal with an endearing sentiment. Love it!

            • Tom Dylan

              Thanks a lot for your comments, Eugene. Really appreciated.

            • Goldfinch60

              I could see that street Tom.

              Andy

              • Tom Dylan

                Thanks, Andy, appreciated. The sky was just beautiful the other night, in contrast to the urban street beneath. It really was something. Cheers, Tom.

              • Reynaldo Casison

                Beautiful

                • Tom Dylan

                  Thanks, Reynaldo. 🙂

                • Thomas W Case

                  Fantastic imagery. You make this come alive.

                  • Tom Dylan

                    Thanks a lot, Thomas. Really appreciated, mate.



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