little flower
when I look deep
into your open sunshine
petals
reminding me of butter
and all that is good
in life and worth the
celebrating
do you have any idea
how on a blue morning
you flood my mind
with memories
of happy and laughter
yet here you are alone
without company on a green
grass lawn
in your smallness
rising above all the rest
to catch a single falling
tear drop
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Cassie58 (
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Really liked this, Cassie. Lovely sentiment.
Thank you Tom Dylan for your lovely review. Much appreciated.
A flower to the rescue. Great write Cassie 😊
Flowers can certainly do just that. Pleased you enjoyed this poem AP, Thank you so much for appreciating my efforts. This was a little buttercup:)
Beautiful words Cassie, took me back to those days where buttercups where everywhere.
Andy
Thank you Andy for such a warm review. Have a beautiful day.
Quite simply beautiful Cassie ..
the colour of buttercups, sunlight, crayons, sunflowers, Del boys three wheeler, dandelions, hope, daisies and this little heart shaped thingy that I leave here behind me this bright sunny, yet still freezing day .. 💛Neville
Thank you Neville for.mentioning all those little yellow things, bright and sunny. Have one of these too. 💛
This takes me to a soothing place with it's delicate and sweet rhythm. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work of art! ❤️
Many thank you’s for your visit Destined Perspectives and for your kind comment. Have a lovely day.
So beautiful. Tremendous work, you make it breathe.
A lovely thought Thomas. Thank you so much.
flowers can say so much in many ways well written
Thank you Jim. I appreciate your visit.
really lovely cassie,
sweetly poignant
Thank you Reynaldo. Have a lovely day. I appreciate you stopping by.
Simply stunning you took me on a trip inside a buttercup. ❤️
Thank you dear Teddy. Pleased you enjoyed my buttercup poem. I appreciate you stopping by. 💐
Lovely the contrast of a single yellow on a field of green that to me represents warmth against growth. And I imagine tear drop is one of joy. So nice.
Thank you so much for your lovely comment sorenbarrett. All the best.
The flower sounds lovely yet lonely love how you have mentioned butter
And even tho it’s small it’s still helpful )
Thank you Caring dove. I hope my little buttercup brought you a spot of sunshine. Pleased you stopped by. 🌹
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