As I walk by My River with My Spirit
I know that others do the same
And walk with their Spirit
By their own Rivers or Streams.
They all flow into the sea
And there in the sea
We will all meet
Bringing love and forgiveness,
Love and forgiveness to all
As we join as one body,
One body of water and Spirit.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 18th, 2024 02:02
- Comment from author about the poem: May we all meet in love and harmony.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 13
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
Comments5
I'm sure I won't be the only one here who hopes you are write ..
Thank you Neville, we can but hope.
Andy
Good write Gold. Then the water is taken up to form clouds, it rains, and fills the rivers, flows back to the seas, and so goes round in a circle!
but the question is, can Orchi swim? 😁
I swim miles - as far from KP as I can. lol.
A powerful poem. Great concept, we're all by our own rivers and streams but we all meet in the sea. Just perfect.
Thank you Tom, most kind.
Andy
A poem after my own heart. Beautifully expressed and also in its depth of meaning. Go with the flow. Lovely work. Have a beautiful day.
Thank you Cassie, very much appreciated.
Andy
Wonderful poem Andy. 😊👍
Most kind AP, thank you.
Andy
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