That Beautiful Dress.

Goldfinch60



The new dress was ordered,

It was a leopard skin pattern.

It arrived and she took it upstairs,

Put it on

And came downstairs in it.

As she walked down the stairs

She said it was too long

And would have to go back.

She walked into the lounge

And there I saw her,

The lady I loved,

In a gorgeous dress.

She looked even more beautiful,

Even more beautiful in that dress.

I was overcome with emotion

I told her she looked wonderful

And looked so beautiful

In this glorious dress

And nothing should be changed.

Once more she got to me,

My beautiful lover.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 23rd, 2024 01:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: For Mary.
  • Category: Special occasion
  • Views: 15
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  • Neville



    Attaboy Tiger .. have a swell week the pair of ya ..

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • Tom Dylan

      A lovely poem. The emotion shines through.

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Tom, thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        A fine write Gold.

      • Cassie58

        A beautiful love poem for your Mary. She may have had doubts about the dress, but she would have no doubts about the sentiment in this beautiful poem. Have a lovely day.

        Your posted music a treat.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Cassie, I know she does not have any doubts, nor do I.

          Andy

        • Bella Shepard

          She could look nothing but beautiful in the eyes of her lover, lucky you! Love your choice of music, Annie's Song is one of my favorites, and I think applies perfectly to your lady love.

          • Goldfinch60

            So true Bella, our love is so strong.

            Yes Annie's Song is one of my favourites as well.

            Andy

          • Doggerel Dave

            I have an extremely strong suspicion that if she turned up in a totally misguided choice from H&M your feelings would have been precisely the same......Andy?

            • Goldfinch60

              So very true Dave, thank you.

              Andy



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