The new dress was ordered,
It was a leopard skin pattern.
It arrived and she took it upstairs,
Put it on
And came downstairs in it.
As she walked down the stairs
She said it was too long
And would have to go back.
She walked into the lounge
And there I saw her,
The lady I loved,
In a gorgeous dress.
She looked even more beautiful,
Even more beautiful in that dress.
I was overcome with emotion
I told her she looked wonderful
And looked so beautiful
In this glorious dress
And nothing should be changed.
Once more she got to me,
My beautiful lover.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 23rd, 2024 01:54
- Comment from author about the poem: For Mary.
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments6
Attaboy Tiger .. have a swell week the pair of ya ..
Thank you Neville, much appreciated.
Andy
A lovely poem. The emotion shines through.
Most kind Tom, thank you.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
A beautiful love poem for your Mary. She may have had doubts about the dress, but she would have no doubts about the sentiment in this beautiful poem. Have a lovely day.
Your posted music a treat.
Thank you Cassie, I know she does not have any doubts, nor do I.
Andy
She could look nothing but beautiful in the eyes of her lover, lucky you! Love your choice of music, Annie's Song is one of my favorites, and I think applies perfectly to your lady love.
So true Bella, our love is so strong.
Yes Annie's Song is one of my favourites as well.
Andy
I have an extremely strong suspicion that if she turned up in a totally misguided choice from H&M your feelings would have been precisely the same......Andy?
So very true Dave, thank you.
Andy
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