Waking up (a mind scrub)

sorenbarrett

Sleeping till the crack of noon

Waking with the setting moon

I always get up too soon

 

On a bet I listened to the sun set

but I never yet saw it get

so hot that it was wet from sweat

 

When reclined, my mind's eye isn't blind

With the alarm declined let me the clock and thoughts unwind

Give me some time to find my mind

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 25th, 2024 04:53
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  • Teddy.15

    Your imagery leaves me right there. Beautiful dear Sorenbarrett. ☀️

    • sorenbarrett

      Teddy you are so kind. Coming form one who's imagery is sublime I bow humbly

    • Goldfinch60

      Your mind is there soren, I find mine at 6 0'clock in the morning.

      Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Gold I appreciate the review but I'm not so sure about the mind. I get up at 6{00 AM but the mind doesn't wake up until much later.



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