The Moon Looks Down.

Goldfinch60



I rise from my bed,

Look out of the window,

The darkness before dawn

Shows me a clear night,

But there in front of me

The light is there once more

As the full moon

Brings its clear light,

Brings its light to my life.

The moon is so precious,

So precious in my life.

On these clear mornings

It brings such wonder,

Such wonder and joy,

Wonder and joy to my life.

I know it looks down,

Looks down with love,

That love for me,

And will be looking,

Looking after my world,

Bringing joy and beauty to me

From my infinite past

To my unending future.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 26th, 2024 02:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: The full moon is always so special to me and it was there for me again this morning.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard.
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Comments11

  • orchidee

    Yes, us two with infinite past. How old are we now?!

    • Goldfinch60

      Sorry Orchi, I cannot count that high now.LOL

      Andy

    • Tom C Dylan

      A fascinating poem. I do love the moon on a clear night and all it brings with it. A fine write.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Tom, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • Neville


        I share your passion sir .. I am a moon watcher too & regardless of the weather .. us birds of a feather eh' ..

        • Goldfinch60

          Yes it is fascinating to watch the moon in all its ways Neville. Let us keep flocking.

          Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Beautiful dear Andy. 💜

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind Teddy, thank you.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            I always loved the moon with the sun representing the male god and moon the female goddess ( I was always partial to Isis) In nature too the moon not only pulls the tides but emotions. A great write Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              It surely does pull the emotions soren, thank you for your fine comments.

              Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              The Moon a hypnotic friend, it pulls on many things, but especially the eyes. Well written Andy. 😊👍

              • Goldfinch60

                So true AP, thank you.

                Andy

              • 2781

                I look for the new moon.

                • Goldfinch60

                  It just looks down on us in all its wonder 2781. Thank you.

                  Andy

                  • 2781

                    And God said, Let their be lights in the firmament of the heaven to divide the day from the night, and let them be for signs, and for seasons, and for days, and years.

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Good old Frank. Great writing.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So true Thomas, good old Frank.

                      Andy

                    • Bella Shepard

                      You've chosen the perfect song to accompany this poem. You've phrased so beautifully the feeling of awe, in the magic of moonlight. Took my breath away!

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Most kind and much appreciated Bella, thank you.

                        Andy

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Enjoy it while you can, Andy - it is all going to be dug up shortly...........!!

                      • John Prophet

                        I liked this!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you John.

                          Andy



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