Water

sorenbarrett

A drop of water

joins others forming the sea

undefeatable

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Comments5

  • orchidee

    That's a lot of water there!

    • sorenbarrett

      Strength in numbers Orchi. Thanks for the read.

    • Teddy.15

      Wow one of the most 5/7/5's I've ever read. Sublime in every single way. Kudos

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Teddy you are too kind. From time to time a drop falls into the mind.

        • Teddy.15

          Fabulous it went missing in my excitement but the word is fabulous 😍

        • orchidee

          It seems nothing much to say the sea level rises, say, 1cm each year. But ALL the sea - that's a lot of water to rise!

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks for the read Orchi. Yes one drop doesn't make much difference but their are a lot of drips out there lol

          • Bella Shepard

            "Simply Elegant".

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks so much Bella you are too kind

            • Goldfinch60

              So true soren.

              Andy

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks Andy the read is appreciated



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