Clouds.

Goldfinch60



Looking up into the sky

You see them surrounded by blue,

They sail through your world

In whites and greys of every hue.

 

In a myriad of shapes and sizes

You see impressions of every type of art,

In many of them that float by

You see that your life has taken a part.

 

Your imagination is always stirred

Looking at the wonders that they shroud,

As your life is passed on by,

By every uniquely, individual cloud.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 30th, 2024 02:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: Clouds are wonderful to look at.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard
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  • 2781

    Good analogy for life- is it not like a vapour?

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you 2781, life is a non ending Spirit.

      Andy

      • 2781

        The passage refers to our time here on earth.

      • orchidee

        Good write Gold.

      • Tom Dylan

        The skies above are really something special. Love this poem.

        • Goldfinch60

          They really are special Tom, thank you.

          Andy

        • Neville


          you an beat an egg, but you can't beat a bit of paradoilia sir ..

          • Goldfinch60

            No you certainly cannot Neville and in life it never ends.

            Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            Once I was taking pictures of a lighthouse off in the distance until I ran out of film. Upon leaving, I happened to look up and saw a cloud shaped perfectly like a question mark. I quickly reached for my camera, and then remembered I'd run out of film. But the memory is still there in my mind. Great write Andy. 😊👍

            • Goldfinch60

              That memory will always be with you AP.
              One I remember is three clouds together and it was as if I was seeing Australia and New Zealand in the sky.

              Andy

            • Teddy.15

              I see images every day in those clouds. A gorgeous write dear Andy. 🤗

              • Goldfinch60

                So do I Teddy, thank you.

                Andy

              • Bella Shepard

                This poem has such a beautiful rhyming pattern, and the subject exquisite. I read it a second time, as I listened to the audio, and it just took me away to the clouds you so eloquently described. Perfect!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Most kind Bella and very much appreciated. Thank you.

                  Andy



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