senryu to Gaza

Teddy.15

 
The final silence
hatred firing death rockets
 two sides, no winner.
 
 
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 3rd, 2024 06:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: senryu, 5/7/5 syllables in three lines speaks of emotion. just in case anyone doesnt know and wants to try. They can be about anything.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Doggerel Dave
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  • Accidental Poet

    You make it look so easy Teddy. 👍

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much A.P anytime you want some lessons if you have never tried one find me on PM anytime ❤️

      • Accidental Poet

        😉👍

      • Neville



        sadly enjoyed or enjoyed sadly .. its all the same to me ..

        • Teddy.15

          Ain't that the truth dear Nev, totally out of my comfort zone this is and yes sadly sadly regrettably written. Thank so much my dear friend. ❤️

        • peto

          A difficult and emotional
          Yet you managed to remain neutral
          Very impressive

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much for noticing dear peto. 🤗

          • Doggerel Dave

            The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an unspoken message, a statement all its own, Teddy. Thanks.

            • Teddy.15

              I'm incredibly humbled dear Dave, thank you so much for your encouraging review. 🤗

            • Thomas W Case

              Tremendous work.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you so much dear Thomas 🤗

              • Parisab

                Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to agree, but there is no profit or power in peace- thanks for bringing attention so that we never forget, dear Teddy …

                • Teddy.15

                  Dearest Parisab, I hope with all my heart we can all see the power in peace it's just incredibly unbelievable what I am watching from Italy. So very kind of you to leave such beautiful words on my scribbles. Thank you. ❤️

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful senryu Teddy and so meaningful in these dreadful times.

                  Andy

                  • Teddy.15

                    Dreadful times for all dear Andy, thank you so much for such kindness. 💜

                  • sorenbarrett

                    One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.

                    • Teddy.15

                      Ah, we are living through some tragic times, but who would we be as writers if we didn't reflect, yes this one seems a bit timeless sad to say. The press and online propaganda do no favours to our world. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret 🌹



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