The final silence
hatred firing death rockets
two sides, no winner.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: senryu, 5/7/5 syllables in three lines speaks of emotion. just in case anyone doesnt know and wants to try. They can be about anything.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: Doggerel Dave
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sadly enjoyed or enjoyed sadly .. its all the same to me ..
Ain't that the truth dear Nev, totally out of my comfort zone this is and yes sadly sadly regrettably written. Thank so much my dear friend. ❤️
A difficult and emotional
Yet you managed to remain neutral
Very impressive
Thank you so much for noticing dear peto. 🤗
The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an unspoken message, a statement all its own, Teddy. Thanks.
I'm incredibly humbled dear Dave, thank you so much for your encouraging review. 🤗
Tremendous work.
Thank you so much dear Thomas 🤗
Great form to describe madness and chaos- I believe the nations wanted to agree, but there is no profit or power in peace- thanks for bringing attention so that we never forget, dear Teddy …
Dearest Parisab, I hope with all my heart we can all see the power in peace it's just incredibly unbelievable what I am watching from Italy. So very kind of you to leave such beautiful words on my scribbles. Thank you. ❤️
Wonderful senryu Teddy and so meaningful in these dreadful times.
Andy
Dreadful times for all dear Andy, thank you so much for such kindness. 💜
One that I missed back when that still applies today and seems that it will not go away soon. Nicely done.
Ah, we are living through some tragic times, but who would we be as writers if we didn't reflect, yes this one seems a bit timeless sad to say. The press and online propaganda do no favours to our world. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
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