Transformation

sorenbarrett

A caterpillar

spins a chrysalis to be

a new butterfly

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  • Teddy.15

    Wow, putting my senryu to shame. 😂 Oh my dear Sorenbarret an outstanding 5/7/5 absolutely a huge kudos inspiring and gosh, your imagery wow. 🦋

    • sorenbarrett

      Teddy you humble me again. Honestly, this is just a filler that popped into mind between others that I was working on. I appreciate so much you most generous remarks. Thank you so much

      • sorenbarrett

        Never that Teddy this one actually was a filler that just popped into mind as I was writing another that is not ready yet. Yours are so well composed and often serve as inspiration. Thanks so much for the most gracious words.

        • Teddy.15

          Incredibly humbled and right back at you my dear friend of poetry. ❤️

        • 2781

          Another good analogy.

        • orchidee

          Good write SB.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks for the support Orchi

          • Accidental Poet

            Inspiration comes in many ways and from many sources. You and Teddy of such sources. 😉👍

            • sorenbarrett

              Me think thou art too kind. But I thank you for the encouragement Accidental

              • Accidental Poet

                You're welcome soren. It was Teddy's poem and you with this poem here that inspired my latest. So I thank you both. 😉👍

              • Parisab

                Simple and beautifully clean!

                • sorenbarrett

                  A most humble thanks for the humbling praise

                • Thomas W Case

                  Here's to new beginnings. Cheers.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    And cheers to you Thomas. Thanks for the read.

                  • arqios

                    Before and after!

                    • sorenbarrett

                      And so it is that the world turns and which is first the chicken of the egg. Appreciate the read and comment Criptic

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Yes we must all mover on in our lives soren.

                      Andy

                      • sorenbarrett

                        So true Andy and following that circle we end up back where we began.



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