There’s a time machine inside you and I
a myth to those who cannot see it
yet to me a journey most definitely possible
from two-thousand and twenty-four
right back to nineteen-ninety-two
in a blink of an eye
who could deny my magnificent mind?
or of that youthful love that once was?
withered with the rose petals of time
faded in-between life and death itself
thus drifting from a once young lover
falling into the frailest of hands
and then onto the wisest of hearts
that has many a tale to tell.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Category: Love
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Comments7
Such a great idea seeing memory as a time machine. This may be more true than apparent. The movie "somewhere in time" brings this to mind. So beautifully stated by you in this wonderful piece.
I've never seen that film, I am always honoured to read your reviews my dear sorenbarret, you are a magnificent source of inspiration to my work and I say with so much sincere gratitude thank you. Maybe I'm hoping the world can also be a time machine remembering that once we all loved and loved eachother a bit more than we do today. ❤️
Beautiful write Teddy, and I'm with you on the world being a time machine remembering the love. A bright start to my day. 😉👍
Oh this old world is getting me down dearest A.P we really have forgotten how to be kind and I hope we all get a throw back of what it could once again be. As for my scribbles thank you as always dear poetic friend of course I had to dig deep to bring my romantic muse out for the day she is berried very deep. 🤗 ❤️
And she has blessed you well Teddy, and the rest of us too. 🫂
there is more significance here than immediately meets the eye .. I got stuck in the late 19 somethings and feel like I am lost or left behind ..
a beautifully crafted poem nevatheless .. Neville
1992 was the first time I fell in love but yes dear Nev, it could I deed be any date for anyone. Thank you dear friend. ❤️
Creatively beautiful! Thanks for invite on the time machine! Bella Ciao!
Wow thank you so very much dear Parisab, always such a pleasure to see you on my post. ❤️
Brilliant work, Teddy.
Thank you dear Thomas. 🤗
Wonderful poem that creates a beautiful visual.
Hello Dear Christina8 thank you so much. 🤗
So true, that time machine can take us back to wondrous times Teddy.
Andy
Ah yes indeed my dear Andy. Thank you. 🌹
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