At The End of The Line
When you get to the end of the line,
what do you intend to leave behind ..
Other than a full stop, or two, that is ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Hopefully some fond memories for who we spent our time with. ❤️
I quite agree and thank thee tooly n truly Teddy .. ❤️
Strong
But it took me a weak to pen it .. Cheers sir & truly .. Neville
Those ... dots imply more words to come.
At the end of the line I get off the train. Doh! But I buy KP a one-way ticket to Australia. lol.
I see .. I also take it you had to re-sit geography ..
What a thought-provoking little poem. Brilliantly done, Neville.
it seems I woz write, I can rely on you Tom .. Cheers mate 🙂
well this is a no brainer, I'll leave behind Orchi singing "Days of Wine and Roses". 🙄 Well penned N.
How very kind my friend .. thank you .. if someone brings some cheese, maybe we could have a cheese & wine evening .. the roses can go to pot .. Neville
That'll be fine, Orchi will be busy singing to KP. 😊
You are only causing confusion here Neville; the end of the line is a full stop...... and it's been nice being around for a long time, but all good things must come to an
end ........................... have that one on me, I always carry a spare ..
😂 Ta!
A legacy would be nice. Lol. Great work N.
You already have that well n truly prepped .. Cheers Tom, that is very kind of you sir .. Neville
It must be 3 dots, not 2. It's all very technical. lol.
three dots is one too many in my book ..
But it's 3 dots (ellipsis) on my PC - meaning 'more options' or 'more choices'. Are 2 dots a short ellipsis? But you are to be commended for saving ink and time, only using 2 dots each time. It takes me all of 5 hours to add another dot to your two dots.
Words of wisdom! Three thought filled lines that delve deeply into the core of who we are. A wonderful reflection!
You just made me feel understood Bella .. and that's such a good feeling, thank you so much ..
I will leave a question mark Neville won't I ?
Andy
You most surely shall .. Bless that golden bill of yours Andy .. Neville
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