Some things are more important than the body
But what is more important than the soul?
A question even for moralists, tangled and knotty
when happiness and love are the goal
Not a question to put on the shelf
if you search deep within, you will find
the body or soul of one loved more than oneself
is all that comes to mind
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How very interesting and I'm sure we all have different views which in its self is inspiring. As ever written with a magnificent pen. ❤️
Thank you Teddy just felt like being a little provocative today. I so appreciate your comments.
Good write SB.
What is the price of Humble Pie? £1.99? $1.99?
More than I can afford, inflation you know and the price keeps going up. Thanks Orchi
£ or $ for you? Are you in UK, USA, or elsewhere?
I would never sell my soul I love my soul. lol yes 🤣 mixing it up today my dear Sorenbarret
Glad to hear that. Thanks Teddy
For without the mind, heart and soul the body would be no more than a lifeless lump of flesh and bones. Excellently penned soren. 😁👍
Thanks Accidental I appreciate the review and kind words. And for what would one sell the mind, hear and soul? Yet many do.
Politicians, they do it all the time. 🙄
That soul, Soren - it's a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost convinced me I have one.
I've got two souls Dave and they are both on the bottom of my feet. I always find myself tripping over them. Thanks for the review Dave it's appreciated.
Powerful and poignant. Well done.
Thanks Thomas
You find a place where poetry and philosophy meet, in this wonderful verse. Would that we truly understood, and lived by it, such a world it would be.
Bella I am always honored by your reviews and comments. Please write some more poems of your own in that I find great pleasure in them and I think I have read all that you have written.
Your full attention here Bella:
I'll second that, Soren.
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We all need to look into ourselves soren to find the glory that is within us all.
Andy
Thanks so much Gold I appreciate the review.
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