Some things are more important than the body
But what is more important than the soul?
A question even for moralists, tangled and knotty
when happiness and love are the goal
Not a question to put on the shelf
if you search deep within, you will find
the body or soul of one loved more than oneself
is all that comes to mind
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: February 6th, 2024 04:57
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Comments7
How very interesting and I'm sure we all have different views which in its self is inspiring. As ever written with a magnificent pen. ❤️
Thank you Teddy just felt like being a little provocative today. I so appreciate your comments.
Good write SB.
What is the price of Humble Pie? £1.99? $1.99?
More than I can afford, inflation you know and the price keeps going up. Thanks Orchi
£ or $ for you? Are you in UK, USA, or elsewhere?
I would never sell my soul I love my soul. lol yes 🤣 mixing it up today my dear Sorenbarret
Glad to hear that. Thanks Teddy
That soul, Soren - it's a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost convinced me I have one.
I've got two souls Dave and they are both on the bottom of my feet. I always find myself tripping over them. Thanks for the review Dave it's appreciated.
Powerful and poignant. Well done.
Thanks Thomas
You find a place where poetry and philosophy meet, in this wonderful verse. Would that we truly understood, and lived by it, such a world it would be.
Bella I am always honored by your reviews and comments. Please write some more poems of your own in that I find great pleasure in them and I think I have read all that you have written.
Your full attention here Bella:
I'll second that, Soren.
How did that happen? Dave my apologies I have to go find out what happened to Bella
Thanks Dave I must have woken up too early and you confused me. Appreciate the review
Hi Soren, I was off floating in the cosmic ether, but I'm back now. All's well. lol
So good to hear it Bella
We all need to look into ourselves soren to find the glory that is within us all.
Andy
Thanks so much Gold I appreciate the review.
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