Notice of absence from Akshat
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In the fading twilight, you slipped away,
A shadow dissolving into the gray.
Your hand, once warm, now slipped away,
A phantom warmth in empty air.
My voice, a broken, silent spray,
Lost in the wind, unanswered prayer.
The world outside blurred, a watery haze,
Each drop a testament to love’s cruel maze.
Regret etched in the lines of my face,
As time unraveled, leaving an empty space.
The stars above witnessed our silent goodbye,
Their distant light mocking my tear-streaked eye.
I reached for you, but you were already gone,
Leaving me with echoes and a love withdrawn.
But though the tears may paint the scene,
And sorrow drapes its heavy cloak,
I'll hold the memory, evergreen,
A whispered echo, hope awoke.
- Author: Akshat (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: February 8th, 2024 02:05
- Comment from author about the poem: The poignant message conveyed by this heartfelt poem is one of loss, longing, and the enduring power of memory. The pain of watching someone they love slip away, leaving behind only echoes and tears. Despite the sorrow, there’s a glimmer of hope—a whispered echo—that keeps their love alive. It speaks to the bittersweet nature of parting and the resilience of the human heart. 🌟
- Category: Sad
- Views: 3
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