We enter our house
And find that love is within
As our house is home
And within this hallowed place
We live with our lasting love.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A tanka is a 5,7,5,7,7 form of Japanese poetry style. We have bee seeing senryu and haiku recently, this is another form in the same style of writing.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments7
nanto shinjitsu no gold finch kyou 🤍
Merci mon ami.
Andre.
A fine write Gold.
KP thinks a Haiku is a Japanese sneeze - Ah-koo! lol.
She may well be right but it needs to be
Atish, atishu
Atishu, atishishu
Atish, atishu
Andy
A thought that should be kept in our minds and hearts whether beset from without or within, where we live should be a place of peace and safety. Lovely
Thank you soren, yes home should be a place of peace, safety and love.
Andy
There should always be happiness and laughter and love in a home dear Andy, so glad it's this way for you too. 🌹
So true Teddy, yes it is that way for me and I hope it is the same for you.
Andy
After reading your poem here, the thought occurred to me that the house is a heart, and vise versa. ❤️🏘️🌹
So true AP, thank you.
Andy
IT is always a joy to read your poems thank you
Most kind David, thank you.
Andy
Truly beautiful.
Much appreciated Thomas.
Andy
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