And It Rained.

Goldfinch60



And it rained!

The water tumbling from the sky,

My River rose and rose,

The path where I walk

No longer there.

The clear green water

Now brown and opaque.

But like life

We have sunny days

And we have rainy days.

I know the rain will stop

And My River will subside.

And once more I will walk,

I will walk my path

Beside the clear green beauty,

The clear green beauty of My River

That I know will return,

As it always does.

It will always be there,

Be there in my life

As I walk by My River

With My Spirit of Life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 9th, 2024 02:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: There will always be sunshine in our lives.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Alan R, Qurrathul Ain.
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Comments9

  • David Wakeling

    What a wonderful poem.Let us hope your river is always ther

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you David, My River is always there for me.

      Andy

    • Tom C Dylan

      A lovely poem. Some great imagery.

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Tom. thank you.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        Will ya repeat this poem tomorrow - for today's rain?!
        Tomorrow is the yesterday.... oh, I never get it right! lol.

        • Goldfinch60

          Probably, just read that the street next to My River is closed due to flooding!

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          As you will always be there Andy. 😊👍

          • Goldfinch60

            That is for sure AP, thank you.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            A great metaphor, we all have deluges in our lives our banks will overflow but with the knowledge that things will subside and return to normal if we only have the patience to wait.

            • Goldfinch60

              So true soren, all will be right in the end.

              Andy

            • Doggerel Dave

              Didn't know you lived on the east coast of Australia, Andy......You are mean - you've hidden the scotch.......

              • Goldfinch60

                I wasn't going to tell you but you are always welcome to have a scotch Dave.

                Andy

              • Thomas W Case

                Tremendous work. Beautiful and great song.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Most kind Thomas, thank you.
                  Yes I like John Denver.

                  Andy

                • Teddy.15

                  Always look on the bright side dear Andy, you wouldn't be you any other way. ❤️

                  • Goldfinch60

                    As you know I always do Teddy, thank you.

                    Andy

                  • Bella Shepard

                    This is such a beautiful metaphor for how we cope with life. Thank you my friend!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Much appreciated Bella, thank you.

                      Andy



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