Fireflies glowing green
beneath a blizzard of stars
smell the night jasmine
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: February 9th, 2024 05:59
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We're imagining this for now, in mid-winter!
From the other side of the world I am there.
I just blew my candles out with a massive wow, love love love fireflies we have them here in the July/August season they just are magical as is this beautiful senryu ❤️
Thanks so much Teddy appreciate the most kind words
Tremendous imagery.
Thanks Thomas
Fireflies, Stars, Jasmine; boom, boom, boom! A sensory explosion extraordinare, just loved it!
Thank you so much Bella for such a kind review
Wonderful haiku soren.
Andy
Thank you Andy appreciate the comment
how very delightful any time of day ..
Thanks so much Neville it is appreciated
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