I cannot see my way
without you beside me
there's no future left
no future, without you
I’ve lost you forever
I’m here all alone
future is empty
my path now unknown
Chorus
I don't want to wake
leave me here to dream
I don't want the day, the day to begin
Your smile, was my light
and now you are gone
like a flower that died
without any sun
Chorus
I don’t want to wake
leave me here to dream
I don't want the day, the day to begin
A guitar without strings
your music has stopped
but my memories, they cling
they’re all that I’ve got
I’m a stream without water
tears just don’t flow
the river I've cried
it's emptied my soul
Chorus
I don't want to wake
leave me here to dream
I don't want the day, the day to begin
Come back to see me
if only in my sleep
let me know what it's like
beyond this world, as I weep
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
please
please, wait for me.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: February 10th, 2024 05:13
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Comments4
"I’m a stream without water
tears just don’t flow
the river I've cried
it's emptied my soul"
Anyone who has suffered this deeply can feel this verse. A sad and somewhat dark song (poem) it is very powerful. The chorus
"I don't want to wake
leave me here to dream"
is highly identifiable and I am sure that I have been there before.
So very kind of you to notice dear sorenbarret it's written after the death of one of my best friends her husband was left holding the baby they were soulmates in every sense, I cannot help reflect on how awful it was and will always be for him now alone with his son. It was in the final of a contest in the UK I didn't win (I never expected too get so far) a piece of work that reflects many of my poems. Now I can share once again dark, yet hopefully relative to those like us who have lost love. 🌹
You are a rock goddess babe .. ❤️
Shhhh il have to dig out my leather pants if you say that 🤣 you are a bit of a rock star yourself babe ❤️
Very relative Teddy. Suffering the loss of a loved one really hits home. 🫂
Thank you dearest A.P it certainly does. 🌹
Such wonderful emotive words Teddy thank you for sharing them.
Andy
Thank you Andy, for coming by and of course it is my pleasure. 🌹
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