Showtime

Teddy.15

 

As evening sun lays his head
onto winter's frozen bed
the moon she rises up once more
stars they twinkle, they adore

Meteor strikes through the sky
lighting up like firefly's 
once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt

Showtime, mother nature’s twist
sun and moon are sky's great gift
of course, they share the same great stage
yet take in turn and never rift.

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Comments7

  • sorenbarrett

    "As evening sun lays his head
    onto winter's frozen bed" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
    "once more the moon, her head will tilt
    and sun will rise from night-timeโ€™s quilt"
    A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.

    • Teddy.15

      Wow I shall take my bow and say I am overwhelmed and so very grateful for your beautiful words. ๐ŸŒน

    • Accidental Poet

      May you take your bow only to repeat it again and again Teddy, for you have put forth here a magnificent poem of rhyme and imagination. One of your best dare I say. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

      • Teddy.15

        Dear A.P I don't write this way very often, I'm so glad you have enjoyed it so much. Thank you dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

      • Thomas W Case

        Beautiful imagery. Powerful work.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Thomas. ๐ŸŒน

        • Bella Shepard

          Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is "magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you so much dear Bella, I'm so delighted you have enjoyed this. ๐ŸŒน

          • evenwheniLie

            Beautiful

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much Sir. ๐ŸŒน

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful words of Nature's beauty and wonder Teddy.

              Andy

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dearest Andy. ๐ŸŒน

              • Neville


                Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. ๐ŸŒน



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