As evening sun lays his head
onto winter's frozen bed
the moon she rises up once more
stars they twinkle, they adore
Meteor strikes through the sky
lighting up like firefly's
once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt
Showtime, mother nature’s twist
sun and moon are sky's great gift
of course, they share the same great stage
yet take in turn and never rift.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: February 11th, 2024 04:55
- Category: Nature
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"As evening sun lays his head
onto winter's frozen bed" a magnificent line I wished i had thought of, followed below with
"once more the moon, her head will tilt
and sun will rise from night-time’s quilt"
A truly ingenious accompaniment to make a perfect completion. It is rare to have one such line in a poem but two in such resolving majesty in the same poem is transcendent indeed. Kudos for this masterpiece.
Wow I shall take my bow and say I am overwhelmed and so very grateful for your beautiful words. 🌹
May you take your bow only to repeat it again and again Teddy, for you have put forth here a magnificent poem of rhyme and imagination. One of your best dare I say. 😊👍
Dear A.P I don't write this way very often, I'm so glad you have enjoyed it so much. Thank you dear friend. 🌹
Beautiful imagery. Powerful work.
Thank you dear Thomas. 🌹
Each stanza can beatifully stand alone, but when combined this poem is "magic. Reading it evokes such a feeling of peace and wonder, it is picture perfect!
Thank you so much dear Bella, I'm so delighted you have enjoyed this. 🌹
Beautiful
Thank you so much Sir. 🌹
Wonderful words of Nature's beauty and wonder Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dearest Andy. 🌹
Simply magic .. much like mother nature herself .. 🌹
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