if she give you her heart
don't break it
she is the best thing you'll ever have
be there for her when she is sad
don't get so mad
she is the only one who can take your pain
she going to be you sunshine and rainbow after the rain
she is the only one that will go the extra mile
the only reason you have a real smile
when your on your death bed
she will be the one to shed the most tears
your death is her biggest fear
treat her like a princesses
complement her when she looks a mess
treat her with the respect she deserves
who cares if she got on your nerves
"bitch"..."hoe"
how you are you goin to call her that
how do you sleep at night
all because of one fight?
she was your only light in the darkest of nights....
and you broke her heart....
just stop, just go
we dont need you anymore
she dose not need this pain
she does not need to cry for you
she askes for shoes you say
"fuck it"... and you think you deserve her
you ask for breakfast in bed. guees what she already 2 steps ahead
but you broke her, mentally, physically
damn
your not a real man
and your no longer my dad
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Author:
nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is not proper writting. men need to learn the place in the world no one is worth more than someone else because of gender. no one should disrespect there significant other. no one deserves to go through so much pain. especially when the pain and hurts coming from the person you loved the most
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I agree. I just love this. It shows your perspective on it.
thank you
Wow! I felt that. You really hit me w this one and it’s obvious you’ve listened well Gone is the military pacing , replaced instead by Heartfelt prose
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Glad you like it bobby!
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