Two Sisters


Two Sisters


Dear lord,

our inadvertent


upon those two


sisters, making

love like

that, in the long


at Lourdes ..

All those

many years ago,

was like

something else

wasn’t it ..

And even today,


I go back there ..

In my

head at least ..

I think

of them smiling

and sprawled ..

Of course,

I also wonder


has become

of them both ..

And where they

might be

today, or what

they are

doing and with

whom ..

After saying

their prayers that is ..




  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 12th, 2024 03:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: All true except I have never been back there .. apart from in my head .. Maybe now, having made my confession, I might get some peace perhaps and move on to what I saw in Bangkok .. 🀍
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  • 2781

    I think Frank Zapper may have written a song about then?

    • Neville

      Good old Frank .. what an absolute legend .. thank you for placing his name on the same page as mine .. Hot Rats & Safe as Milk immediately spring to mind .. Neville

      • 2781

        I was thinking Catholic girls

      • arqios

        Oh, there is a consequent write then for the Bangkok scene!

        • Neville

          ....................... write maybe πŸ™‚

          • arqios

            Or more!

          • Tom C Dylan

            Fascinating, Neville. I scrolled down to the author comments to see if this was true and wasn't disappointed. πŸ™‚
            Looking forward to the Bangkok phase too.

            • Neville

              Thank you Tom .. we shall have to wait and see .. Neville

            • Doggerel Dave

              🀣Too much Neville - reminded me of the old "Where's the soap?" joke - only to be followed by BangCock......

              • Neville

                ........................ Ooh err Matron looked like two penguins having a delightful scrap so it di 🐧🐧)

              • orchidee

                KP and her sister? Not 'sisters' as in 'nuns'!

                • Neville

                  sisters as in nuns 🐧🐧

                  • orchidee

                    I thought you met KP and her sister. lol.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    You do get around N, don't you. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

                    • Neville

                      it is how I measure time .. either between one vacation and the next, or one working holiday abroad and another .. πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

                      • Accidental Poet

                        Home is where the heart is. 😊

                      • Christina8

                        Sounds like you had a bit o fun, and more fun awaits you in bangkok. Great write!

                        • Neville

                          I was merely an observer & an unplanned one at that .. I've probably suffered from some kind of shock disorder ever since .. but thank you regardless .. Neville

                        • Thomas W Case

                          Lol, I love this. Very creative and right to the point. No words wasted. Superb.

                          • Neville

                            tis nowt but the gospel truth sir .. and I thank you truly .. Neville

                          • jarcher54

                            For interfering, say 10 Hail Marys.

                            • Neville

                              I didn't interfere m'lud honest .. me n the missus were just passing .. πŸ˜‡

                            • Goldfinch60

                              One often wonders about things that were seen in the past Neville.


                              • Neville

                                we call them either memories or photographic images these days Andy .. the girls, as I recall were both very pretty but declined to remain still and have their image taken .. Long before mobile phones and camera's .. and anyway .. my black powder was not dry enough .. Neville

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