Two Sisters
Dear lord,
our inadvertent
stumbling
upon those two
novice
sisters, making
love like
that, in the long
grass
at Lourdes ..
All those
many years ago,
was like
something else
wasn’t it ..
And even today,
when
I go back there ..
In my
head at least ..
I think
of them smiling
and sprawled ..
Of course,
I also wonder
what
has become
of them both ..
And where they
might be
today, or what
they are
doing and with
whom ..
After saying
their prayers that is ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: All true except I have never been back there .. apart from in my head .. Maybe now, having made my confession, I might get some peace perhaps and move on to what I saw in Bangkok .. 🤍
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I think Frank Zapper may have written a song about then?
Good old Frank .. what an absolute legend .. thank you for placing his name on the same page as mine .. Hot Rats & Safe as Milk immediately spring to mind .. Neville
I was thinking Catholic girls
Oh, there is a consequent write then for the Bangkok scene!
....................... write maybe 🙂
Or more!
Fascinating, Neville. I scrolled down to the author comments to see if this was true and wasn't disappointed. 🙂
Looking forward to the Bangkok phase too.
Thank you Tom .. we shall have to wait and see .. Neville
🤣Too much Neville - reminded me of the old "Where's the soap?" joke - only to be followed by BangCock......
........................ Ooh err Matron looked like two penguins having a delightful scrap so it di 🐧🐧)
KP and her sister? Not 'sisters' as in 'nuns'!
sisters as in nuns 🐧🐧
I thought you met KP and her sister. lol.
You do get around N, don't you. 😉👍
it is how I measure time .. either between one vacation and the next, or one working holiday abroad and another .. 😎👍
Home is where the heart is. 😊
Sounds like you had a bit o fun, and more fun awaits you in bangkok. Great write!
I was merely an observer & an unplanned one at that .. I've probably suffered from some kind of shock disorder ever since .. but thank you regardless .. Neville
Lol, I love this. Very creative and right to the point. No words wasted. Superb.
tis nowt but the gospel truth sir .. and I thank you truly .. Neville
For interfering, say 10 Hail Marys.
I didn't interfere m'lud honest .. me n the missus were just passing .. 😇
One often wonders about things that were seen in the past Neville.
Andy
we call them either memories or photographic images these days Andy .. the girls, as I recall were both very pretty but declined to remain still and have their image taken .. Long before mobile phones and camera's .. and anyway .. my black powder was not dry enough .. Neville
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