Fantasia

Teddy.15

 

Just sitting on the grand piano stool in silence

my fingers placed upon its keys

Mozart’s Rondo Alla Turca

I suddenly started to play

I couldn’t feel my hands they were numb

but I couldn’t help but notice they were shaking

that’s the moment I closed my eyes

my arms, moving so fast

I had no control

almost as if my muse had taken over

I could hear the music

for once I felt great passion from within

and just then, I opened my eyes...

to find myself loading dishes into the dishwasher.

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  • Parisab

    Brava! Fatto a Firenze:)

    • Teddy.15

      lol Firenze per sempre grazie mille cara Parisab. Fa bene ridere. 🌹

    • Tom Dylan

      Just fantastic! I'd give this a standing ovation if I could. A great build up and the last line just nailed it! Brilliant!

      • Teddy.15

        LOL so kind and very much the story of my life dear Tom I have so many of these wonderful fantasies. In my next life I'm hoping to be a princess. LoL happy Friday to you Mr T.C.D 🌹

        • Tom Dylan

          I know what you mean. I'm always thinking of random ideas for stories and poems. Always going off on a tangent. My wife says I have a headful of magic! 🙂 Happy Friday to you, Teddy.

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Good to read one of your poems Teddy. It has been some hard days. I need a good fantasy.

          • Teddy.15

            My dear Jerry, anytime my dear friend, sorry to hear the days have been hard. Big hug from the teddy. ❤️

          • Accidental Poet

            Teddy, you had me lost in that fantasy too. Excellently penned dear poet. May I join your next concert? 😉👍

            • Teddy.15

              Oh come join me on the fantasia of your choice my dear A.P as long as it is not washing dishes lol 🤣 ❤️

              • Accidental Poet

                Or clothes. 😁

              • Kieron

                A great twist! Like it 🙂

                • Teddy.15

                  A very warm welcome to my page Kieran, so very kind of you to come to say. Thank you. 🌹

                • sorenbarrett

                  You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never became all that proficient in that my teacher refused to teach me blues when I was a child. Then the end or your poem hit me and the title made sense and I realized I had been doing the same as I read it. Very nice

                  • Teddy.15

                    LOL 🤣 well don't just stand there dear pass me the plates!

                    Thank you my dear sorenbarret always lovely to see you on my page. 🌹 Kudos on your own talent of piano forte

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Powerful work. Excellent.

                    • Teddy.15

                      🤣 thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Wonderful fun words Teddy, did you mange to finish the piece of music?

                      Andy

                      https://youtu.be/dXa8my9pb5g?si=9QK7F4IqBt_yqDyv

                      • Teddy.15

                        My dear Andy thank you yes I love this music and I love the thought of playing piano whilst in fact I'm loading the dishwasher. Always good to have fun dear Andy. Thank you. 🌹

                      • Neville



                        almost the same thing happened to me a while back .. I thought I was playing a sitar .. opened my eyes and was plucking a chicken .. ❤️

                        • Teddy.15

                          Lmao 🤣 wonderful imagery ❤️



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