No commitment
no devotion.
I'm like a boat on the
ocean with you;
tossed and broken by
the waves of your emotions.
Your hurricane is dangerous.
I'm heading for dry land.
- Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: February 18th, 2024 16:13
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Comments8
Yup, can certainly relate to that.
Nice work.
Ah.. how violate they can be!
yes, for sure. Thank you.
Impressive write!
Thank you.
Brilliant poem, Thomas. Says it all. Very well done. Can relate to so much.
Thank Tom, much appreciated.
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
Thank you.
Good write T. You ashore yet?!
I made it. Thanks for the read.
sometimes it is best to shut up shop and high tail it outa there .. best wait for low tide first tho .. maybe .. Neville
Yes, thanks bro.
Making a plan very cool. 🌹
Thank Teddy.
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