Almost Famous Last Words

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

Almost Famous Last Words

 

Although this heart be stilled

the world still spins

albeit slow and now much darker ..

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 21st, 2024 02:02
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Goldfinch60

    But that heart is still there Neville and may arise with love once again.

    Andy

    • Neville



      fingers crossed .. ta my fine feathered optimist .. Neville

    • orchidee

      You know I'm gonna say summat like this - I will never hear KP's last words to me, though I long to hear them. She's never gonna say them to me: 'Goodbye for ever!' lol.

      • Neville


        indeed, you are probably one of the most predictable rodents I have ever encountered .. not that I am counting of course ..

        • orchidee

          See my other comment too? I'm a nutty G-Pig at times!

        • orchidee

          To be daft and insensitive to any emotion in this poem - why is the world much darker? Are the dark evenings drawing in?!
          OR - who turned the light off?! heehee.

        • Doggerel Dave

          So you embark on an odyssey - the quest for the perfect black....just rev the world up and continue....

          • Neville



            its probably double filtered Columbian in an oversized bone china cup .. sipped 🙂

          • Teddy.15

            Beautifully sad 😢 Nev, so little yet so much said. ❤️

            • Neville



              its a bit like man flu .. nothing really except over exaggerated & far too often .. 🌹

            • Thomas W Case

              You sure bring this one home. Superb work.

              • Neville



                At the end of a very long day, that'll do nicely .. ta .. Neville

              • Dove

                So sad, I wondered who passed away... Perhaps it was just time hitting the hay.😎

                • Neville



                  Thank you so bloomin much for indulging this old fella .. You have darn near exhausted me ma'am .. Like I've said so many times before .. I wish you would hang around for longer .. much longer 🤍



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