Almost Famous Last Words
Although this heart be stilled
the world still spins
albeit slow and now much darker ..
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Neville (
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But that heart is still there Neville and may arise with love once again.
Andy
fingers crossed .. ta my fine feathered optimist .. Neville
You know I'm gonna say summat like this - I will never hear KP's last words to me, though I long to hear them. She's never gonna say them to me: 'Goodbye for ever!' lol.
indeed, you are probably one of the most predictable rodents I have ever encountered .. not that I am counting of course ..
See my other comment too? I'm a nutty G-Pig at times!
To be daft and insensitive to any emotion in this poem - why is the world much darker? Are the dark evenings drawing in?!
OR - who turned the light off?! heehee.
So you embark on an odyssey - the quest for the perfect black....just rev the world up and continue....
its probably double filtered Columbian in an oversized bone china cup .. sipped 🙂
Beautifully sad 😢 Nev, so little yet so much said. ❤️
its a bit like man flu .. nothing really except over exaggerated & far too often .. 🌹
And still, most wonderful words N. 👍
at the end of a very long day, you know how to make an old fella feel good about his efforts .. cheers AP .. Neville
I could be wrong N, but I think that's what it's all about. Having a smile at the end of the day. 😊
You sure bring this one home. Superb work.
At the end of a very long day, that'll do nicely .. ta .. Neville
So sad, I wondered who passed away... Perhaps it was just time hitting the hay.😎
Thank you so bloomin much for indulging this old fella .. You have darn near exhausted me ma'am .. Like I've said so many times before .. I wish you would hang around for longer .. much longer 🤍
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