Wind in a jar

sorenbarrett

Some fear death

Some life

Bloody hands of Lady Macbeth

combing with a butcher knife

 

Van Gough whittled his ear

Dostoevsky's faux firing squad

Poe drunk on his child wife's bier

De Vinci painted Mona Lisa flawed

 

A kamikaze metal band

A photographic assassin scar

Holding smoke in my hand

Dancing the wind into a jar

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 21st, 2024 04:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    I never knew there was so much in life! lol.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi yea that's why I always feared life and to torment me I like you have had a long one. Thanks so much for the review friend

      • orchidee

        Ahh, so this is not related to baked beans? Windy! lol.

      • 2781

        We've all got to go-what more can a man do but to eat, drink, and enjoy the fruits of his labour.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks for the review 2781 eat, drink and be merry until the fruits start to spoil.

          • 2781

            The fruit gets sweeter the longer their on the vine.

          • Teddy.15

            Wow so original and so brilliant in imagery although I'm hoping the wind in the jar is from the park 🤣 lol brilliant my dear sorenbarret 🌹

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Teddy for such kind remarks. I do appreciate your review friend

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful imagery and imagination soren, I am quite happy with what I have at present thank you.

              Andy

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks for the read Andy and for the kind words of support.



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