it now hurts

so much

to see ..

He no longer


going blind ..



he still


to this

very day

the moment


whisky sour


bitter sweet,


the glare

of her

baby blue eyes ..


  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 22nd, 2024 03:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: they were really more like forget-me-nots .. 🀍
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard.
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  • Teddy.15

    Well this is so deep so beautiful and incredible sad all at once. Another one which will relate for so many scenarios. 🌹

    • Neville

      Multi grazia Teddy and then some🌹

      • Teddy.15

        Non c'è di che ❀️

      • orchidee

        How can I forget the forget-me-nots of KP's botox eyes?! lol.

        • Neville

          You are a hard act to follow Steven .. but I've known real folk who have been banged up for less ..

          • orchidee

            Squeak, squeak - KP's gonna eat me for dinner one day!

          • Accidental Poet

            As long as you've survived N, that's the important thing. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

            • Neville

              that's not only encouraging, it's so very reassuring .. ta AP .. N πŸ™‚

            • Kinsey Peterson

              The way you used the changing of the alcohol was very well done to describe the emotions within your piece. I appreciate learning from your work πŸ™‚

              • Neville

                I am most honoured Kinsey .. bless you and truly tooly ma'am .. Neville πŸ™‚ 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Memories can bring so many emotions Neville.

                (My Laphroaig always tastes wonderful though - LOL)


                • Neville

                  I'm a single malt and sake man myself .. not in the same glass tho .. Cheers .. Neville

                • Bella Shepard

                  The mind's eye holds the image, but the heart holds emotion, kept safe as a wonderful memory. Beautifully versed dear friend.

                  • Neville

                    Thank you so much for spoiling me Bella .. so very muchly appreciated my Friend .. Neville

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