Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
He cannot, not smile as he opens her wide
and as she groans
like a tree, feeling the weight of new fruit ..
While the swollen river
beneath them, flows pulsing and pressing,
compelling, constraining
like silk and like satin, shaping and sliding ..
They then move as one,
both to-ing and fro-ing, each knowing how,
where and when, to take and to give ..
Then to bend and to tighten their grip and
release before probing ..
To ache, so sublimely to shudder and slip ..
And as he squeezes the fruit
at the tip of each peak, then bites, but so gently
each one so sweet .. Then come the thrusts ..
Like a stallion between
the depths of her folds, her petals, those lips,
he comes crashing like thunder ..
And she, like a waterfall loses all self-control
yet in that moment, both knew
there could be no stopping, or indeed, turning back ..
So he held her more tightly
to take him more fully, twas then they did crash, tho’
never more complete, nor more wholly ..
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Neville (
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Comments8
Don't explain the meaning further, or I will swoon! lol.
Orchi, you were swooning at sight of the title, then lost it at poem's end. 😂
if I did, would it put you into a very deep state of unconsciousness from the tip of your nose to the bottom of your coma toes ..
You've ex-seeded yourself there, Neville...
I always tried to make like a dandelion and spread them as widely as the breeze would allow ..
A personal experience I presume N, and a great one at that. 😉👍
I was taken aback and completely blown away so can't remember any of the finer details .. 😉👍
As erotica, I think your poetry is so vivid in your descriptions, delicately and tastefully so.....I think I need to step out for some air!
Blimey .. BIG breaths ................ 🍒
I'm having a hot flush over here lol love the scenery especially on your last lines. 🔥
I love it when you become sub tropical like that .. 🌹
Titillating, tantalizing, and metaphorically tremendous. I'd say "WOW," but that would be an understatement. You've given this old Catholic School Girl something to ponder. Yes indeed!
I was worried it might have been a bit over the top .. so thanks for the reassurance and for such a fine endorsement Bella .. so very much appreciated .. and I must confess, you've given this old fella something else to think about .. my favourite flavour too ... cheers🍷
I'll drink to that!
It must have been a wonderful time Neville.
Andy
................................. 😎👍a gentleman neva tells but cheers Andy 🙂
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)
Ha .. a warm welcome will always be waiting for you Cassie .. 🔥
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