Darkness Come

sorenbarrett

Darkness come to sooth my eyes

Cover me with the night

a warm blanket sheltering me from fear's skies,

cooling passion's burning blight

 

Buried in the tomb of forgetfulness

Washed in waters of fantasy

Cleansed in the fires of regretful stress

Left clothed so scantily

 

Dress me with cobwebs spun of hope

A leprous fetus teething

A tourniquet of barbwire, strands of soap

Death breathing

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2024 04:25
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    Another outstanding poem, none can escape the hands of Death but your words make it in a strange way exciting.

    Buried in the tomb of forgetfulness

    Washed in waters of fantasy

    Cleansed in the fires of regretful stress

    Left clothed so scantily

    Love this stanza but your ending is superb too. 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      Once again thanks so much Teddy your words brighten the day and serve as encouragement. It is valued and most appreciated.

    • orchidee

      Can ya put a light on? I can't see a thing in the dark! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        Oh Orchi your Hymns always shine with light. Thanks Orchi.

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful words soren but out of that darkness the light will be there for you and for all of us.

        Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you Andy, the dawn always follows the night. I appreciate the review and the kind words.

        • rhmn_7

          your poetry enlightens every darkness..

          • sorenbarrett

            You are too kind. I thank you so much for your words of encouragement.



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