Three Summers
It was never meant
to be like this ..
It was meant to be
perfect forever ..
And indeed it was,
for three
whole summers ..
Then out of the blue,
she went and she broke it ..
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Neville (
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Them's the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)
Thanks for the thumbs up at least ..
Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹
indeed .. that's very nearly a whole flock of em .. 🌹
You had the three summers all in one day?!
Do two swallows (a variation on 'one swallow', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.
You kinda lost me twice ..
Your title is Three Summers, so that made me think of 'How many swallows make a Summer? Or in my version 'How many guinea pigs make a Summer? lol.
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.
it is indeed a mourning song Cassie .. thank you for noticing & a happy Sunday mane to you too ..
Beautiful work. Powerful.
Big THANKS
Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.
Andy
Do you know what .. maybe I did .. N
Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).
Now wouldn’t that be a fine thing .. thankyou so much for coming on board ..
Neville
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.
Many thankyou's my friend ... Neville
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