Je Reviens

Cassie58

i will return 

says the perfume 

a promise in a 

bottle of midnight 

blue ….

 

today for the sake 

of old times 

she wore it anew 

with a pledge 

 

its fragrance is lasting 

it lingers ….

 

yes it lingers for you …


green floral 

with a hint of narcissus 

and a touch of English rose 

I suppose she is saying 

something as old as 

the Malvern Hills 

 

here for all time 

refreshed 

drenched in summer’s rain 

where there is love 

patient darling 

there is also pain 

 

  • Author: Cassie58 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2024 14:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: I don’t do love poems, but my muse does
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Teddy.15.
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Comments15

  • David Wakeling

    An amazing poem.It took me there.

    • Cassie58

      Thank you so much David for your review. Pleased you enjoyed my poem.

    • Accidental Poet

      Cassie, tell your Muse this is very well penned. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

      • Cassie58

        My muse says thank you very much AP. She is very pleased you like this poem. Have a lovely day.

        • Accidental Poet

          And you too Cassie. 😊

        • Teddy.15

          Well you kind of just took my breath away. Absolutely beautiful that touch of an English rose will forever be inside you my dear poetess. 🌹

          • Cassie58

            Thank you for your warm and encouraging words Teddy. Have a wonderful Sunday dear poet. πŸ’

          • Doggerel Dave

            With you on love poetry. A sudden scent, fragrance can evoke (and has) a memory definitely not forgotten, just filed, from years back.
            Your poem served as that scent in absentia.

            • Cassie58

              Thank you so much DD for your review. Pleased my scented words evoked a lovely memory. Have a great Sunday.

              • Doggerel Dave

                I'm 'Dave', Cassie and if you behave, I'll be back....LOL.

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              • Introverted Sage

                Beautiful write.

                'where there is love
                patient darling
                there is also pain'

                Brilliant!

                • Cassie58

                  So pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much for stopping by. I appreciate your thoughtful words.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Wonderful loving words Cassie.

                  Andy

                  • Cassie58

                    Thank you so much Andy. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Have a lovely day.

                  • Neville

                    At last .. I'm in .. just wanted to let you know I came by earlier (well yesterday actually) but was unable to leave even a trace of myself behind .. except for a like .. I was the first to leave a like .. and that by the way was a massive understatement .. my personal very most favouwritest scent in the whole wide world perfumedly wrapped up in a love poem .. most assuredly one of the best and what's more, you may never truly know how much my senses were tickled .. am tempted to sniff the screen .. thank you for posting Neville πŸ’œ

                  • Cassie58

                    Sadly my inefficiency at navigating this site on my phone has managed to lock others out too Neville. So pleased your senses were tickled.and I thank you for such a warm review. I have a bottle of this perfume on my dressing table. I might even wear it today. Make sure your day is happiness filled dear friend. πŸ’œ

                  • Cloie

                    Your poem is a beautiful reflection on memory, love, and the enduring nature of emotions. The imagery of perfume as a promise, with its lingering fragrance, is powerful and evocative. The mention of specific scents like narcissus and English rose adds a sensory depth to the poem. Wonderful!

                    • Cassie58

                      Thank you Cloie for such a beautiful review. I really appreciate you stopping by.

                    • rhmn_7

                      That beautiful scent still lives in the memories, doesn't it?

                      • Cassie58

                        Thank you so much for commenting. Yes the scent has special significance. So pleased you stopped by.

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Great work. Nice use of the senses.

                      • Cassie58

                        Many thanks Thomas for stopping by.

                      • John Prophet

                        Absolutely true.. Great write.

                        • Cassie58

                          Many thanks for stopping by John. All the best.

                        • sorenbarrett

                          I love the way this is written without a specific narrator as if a unfaced voice is speaking form the beyond. The imagery is wonderful and the ending sublime

                        • Cassie58

                          Thank you for such a wonderfully positive review. Delighted you enjoyed this poem.
                          All the best:)



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