Song of a siren

sorenbarrett

Carnivorous willing flesh

Submissive, curves of warmth

Longing, lustful breaths

Fingers reaching south touching north

 

Quenching, magnetic lips

Trembling, pulsing

Foaming, panting hips

Death on a wave convulsing

 

Two legged naked hell

singing under seductive skin

Lust's tentacles spell

bait for vampiric sin

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2024 03:27
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, rhmn_7
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  • Teddy.15

    Sounds to me someone's blood is being drained, a gothic feel and magnificent imagery song of a siren indeed kudos. 🌹 🦇

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks for the read friend. One of your recent writes brought this one to mind. Appreciate your comments.

      • Teddy.15

        Wow I'm truly humbled. 🌹

      • orchidee

        Ahh, a bad hair day! lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Would be if I was a sailor. Thanks for the read Orchi it is most appreciated.

          • orchidee

            Only 'siren' I know is the Fire Engine! lol.

          • Cloie

            Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It's like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!

            • sorenbarrett

              Your words are too kind. They are most deeply appreciated and serve as encouragement brightening the day.

              • Cloie

                I'm glad my words could bring some brightness to your day! I feel people as talented as you deserve all the appreciation. Words seem insufficient to fully capture the depth of your skills. Well, Take care!

                • sorenbarrett

                  You humble me

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Soren, if you keep on like this , I'm going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I'm going to enjoy it while I can...
                  A well crafted write.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    A lady of the night will always raise the BP the best medicine is walking away. Thanks Dave appreciate the read.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Man, is it hot in here? Thought I was in a fantasy there for a minute. I'm surprised Orchi wasn't swooning. Very well penned soren. 😊👍

                    • sorenbarrett

                      How hot is hot? Here is about 27 degrees or 82 Fahrenheit Thanks for the review and comment.

                      • Accidental Poet

                        I always say, "I'd rather sweat than shiver". 🌞

                      • Thomas W Case

                        So powerful. Great work.

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thanks so much Thomas

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.

                          Andy

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Blood, money, sex, power all powerful motivators Andy and any could be substituted here. Thanks so much for the read and kind words.



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