Carnivorous willing flesh
Submissive, curves of warmth
Longing, lustful breaths
Fingers reaching south touching north
Quenching, magnetic lips
Trembling, pulsing
Foaming, panting hips
Death on a wave convulsing
Two legged naked hell
singing under seductive skin
Lust's tentacles spell
bait for vampiric sin
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sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2024 03:27
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Sounds to me someone's blood is being drained, a gothic feel and magnificent imagery song of a siren indeed kudos. 🌹 🦇
Thanks for the read friend. One of your recent writes brought this one to mind. Appreciate your comments.
Wow I'm truly humbled. 🌹
Ahh, a bad hair day! lol.
Would be if I was a sailor. Thanks for the read Orchi it is most appreciated.
Only 'siren' I know is the Fire Engine! lol.
Your poem dives deep into the tangled web of desire with such vivid imagery! It's like a rollercoaster of emotions and sensations. Keep weaving those words!
Your words are too kind. They are most deeply appreciated and serve as encouragement brightening the day.
I'm glad my words could bring some brightness to your day! I feel people as talented as you deserve all the appreciation. Words seem insufficient to fully capture the depth of your skills. Well, Take care!
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Soren, if you keep on like this , I'm going to have to have my GP re-evaluate my BP medication - in the meantime I'm going to enjoy it while I can...
A well crafted write.
A lady of the night will always raise the BP the best medicine is walking away. Thanks Dave appreciate the read.
Man, is it hot in here? Thought I was in a fantasy there for a minute. I'm surprised Orchi wasn't swooning. Very well penned soren. 😊👍
How hot is hot? Here is about 27 degrees or 82 Fahrenheit Thanks for the review and comment.
I always say, "I'd rather sweat than shiver". 🌞
So powerful. Great work.
Thanks so much Thomas
Wonderful words of lust and seduction for blood soren.
Andy
Blood, money, sex, power all powerful motivators Andy and any could be substituted here. Thanks so much for the read and kind words.
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