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I know I still am
because it hurts me so much
I just dare not look
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2024 04:45
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- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard.
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I'm afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They've all cracked! lol.
She must be shattered
Dunno how, in one sense - she's never done a minute's work in her life!
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....
Sum numbers sure suck don't they ..
Some for sure...look at the way a square root has aided in the uncoupling of some of the greatest mysteries of the universe....or something...
Painful. 🌹 Yet a perfect 575 ❤️
thanks for seeing it my way this Sunday Teddy 🌹
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.
Many thanks indeed Cassie ..
Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!
Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …
An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍
You a way too kind AP .................. you are a ⭐NP
We're in a galaxy of stars N. 👍🖖
Excellent work.
Not really, I was meant to write an essay .. but cheers anyway .. Neville
"I grieve, therefore I am". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!
You know what .. you are so write Bella .. so very Zen .. thankyou karmaly 🤍
I know you still are
Your words bring joy to us all
Just keep on looking
Andy
You are far too kind Andy ..
Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …
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