575

Neville

575

 

I know I still am

because it hurts me so much

I just dare not look

 

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  • orchidee

    I'm afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They've all cracked! lol.

    • Neville



      She must be shattered

      • orchidee

        Dunno how, in one sense - she's never done a minute's work in her life!

      • Doggerel Dave

        Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....

        • Neville



          Sum numbers sure suck don't they ..

          • Doggerel Dave

            Some for sure...look at the way a square root has aided in the uncoupling of some of the greatest mysteries of the universe....or something...

          • Teddy.15

            Painful. 🌹 Yet a perfect 575 ❤️

            • Neville



              thanks for seeing it my way this Sunday Teddy 🌹

            • Cassie58

              A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.

              • Neville



                Many thanks indeed Cassie ..

              • Christina8

                Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!

              • Neville


                Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …

              • Accidental Poet

                An interesting scribble
                Far removed from any quibble
                A poet not in sight will belittle
                Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍

                • Neville



                  You a way too kind AP .................. you are a ⭐NP

                  • Accidental Poet

                    We're in a galaxy of stars N. 👍🖖

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Excellent work.

                    • Neville



                      Not really, I was meant to write an essay .. but cheers anyway .. Neville

                    • Bella Shepard

                      "I grieve, therefore I am". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!

                      • Neville



                        You know what .. you are so write Bella .. so very Zen .. thankyou karmaly 🤍

                      • Goldfinch60

                        I know you still are
                        Your words bring joy to us all
                        Just keep on looking

                        Andy

                        • Neville



                          You are far too kind Andy ..

                        • Neville


                          Absolutely a femme fatal wound no less …



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