The day's empire returns to dirt
shadows bowing from the sun
as it retires in its scarlet nightshirt
evening's cobwebs yet to be spun
Night's silver crescent smile
sky in sequin gown
parades the milky way aisle
wearing a starry crown
a blazing, falling tear
into distant oceans
heaven's steel gray mirror
reflecting firmament's emotions
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: February 27th, 2024 03:09
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Utterly beautiful I found myself thinking of those already in that distant sky above, I cannot choose a favourite line because as you always do, you create such beauty and make it come alive. So much to enjoy in this dear sorrenbarret, I just love it. 🌹
Thank you Teddy for another most gracious review it is so appreciated.
Three stanzas of penned delight. You never fail to please with the beauty and wisdom in your words. You have gifted your readers with a gem. Have a lovely day.
Thank you Cassie for you most gracious words they are valued and cherished.
A fine write SB.
Thanks Orchi
'Night's silver crescent smile.' It painted such a beautiful and serene picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing
Thank you so much for your gracious comment it valued and apprecited
Wonderful words soren, I could see the Universe in your words.
Andy
Thanks Andy kind of you to say so. Appreciate it.
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