even in the throes
of death
her last breath imminent
he took his brushes
a palette of pales
and a canvas
to capture her ashen
features
thin dry lips half parted
it was natural he said
to paint her before
she departed
in hues of shroud like
mourning veils
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you discribed it so good!Loved it.
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I appreciate you stopping by.
A superb piece of poetry dear Cassie, I'm going to do some research to see if I can find the portrait you have left a desire for me to see it. Extremely profound piece an many ways. ๐น
Thank you so much Teddy. A very haunting painting. I am a huge fan of Monet and particularly like his water lily canvases. I have a few prints myself. So pleased you found value in this short piece. Sadly Camille was only 32 when she died. There are other paintings of her. ๐น
I just found it extraordinary and quite a pose. ๐น
Quite a haunting and sombre piece isnโt it Teddy.? Thank you for looking it up.
It is indeed it paints a very haunting picture that one can actually feel. Thank you for sharing. ๐น
Sublime imagery painting love hard core. Tremendous.
Thank you Thomas. Pleased you found value in this poem. I appreciate your support.
and so she stayed forever young .. now in black and white, for always ..
perfectly portrayed our Cassie .. Neville
She did indeed stay forever young Neville, and as you say I have captured her now in a poem. Thank you as always for your support of my efforts.
I've never seen it. He must have loved her very much. Well written Cassie. ๐
I think he did love her very much. The painting is quite a haunting piece. Quite different from his other work. Thank you AP. I appreciate you.
As AP (above). Many thanks, Cassie.
You returned, so I must be behaving myself lol. Thank you Dave for stopping by to read my efforts.
I don't recall you ever not behaving yourself, Cassie....... mind you.....
Thereโs always opportunity for a first time ๐
Good write!
I had to go check out the painting for myself.. hauntingly beautiful.
Thanks for sharing
Thank you so much IS for stopping by with your thoughts. All the best.
Wonderful words of last love Cassie.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy. He loved her very much. Sadly she died at 32. Have a lovely day.
Could almost picture her
Great writing
Thank you peto for stopping by with your thoughts. All good wishes.
I love Monet and your beautiful poem.
Thank you Thomas. I love his paintings too. I appreciate your visit.
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