a violin plays Vaughan Williams
its four steel core strings
strung to Welsh perfection
vibrations of high pitched notes
float in spiral movement
as the reed bow sweeps low
then moves slowly upwards
imitating a lark, the messenger
of a brand new morning
rising above roof tops, above spires
higher on spanned feathered wings
avian beauty scaling the heights
ascending in circular flight
in blue sky above verdant green fields
of English countryside
close your weary eyes
transcend closer to the sleeping stars
soaring in new found freedom
far above the problematic earth
far from the troubles of the day
rebirth, there fly I
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Cassie58 (
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Good write C.
'There flied I too, as I was The Birdman, but crashed going over a cliff. lol.
Better you flied rather than you fried Orchi. Getting too near the sun, wouldn’t do you any good. Better stay grounded:) Many thanks for stopping by btw if you like classical, this piece is tops.
And the ride of a lifetime ❤️ I was flying up there too. A magical mesmerising poem.
Thank you kindly Teddy. This poem was inspired by the classical music of the same. If I need to chill out, this piece does it for me every time. How I would love to be that lark. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. Have a lovely day. 🌹
This is a beautiful description of a wonderful piece of music. Very well done
Thank you David for your kind coment. That piece of music is inspirational. It is so relaxing. Helps me chill out. I become the lark. Have a good day.
You give us all wings with this musically transcendent poem. The imagery exquisite, and the final stanza wraps this gift up with a beautiful bow. Loved it!
Dear Bella, your lovely comment has given me wings too. That classical piece of music, totally chills me out. I love it. I become the lark. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. Have a great Thursday. 🌹
Superb work. Very good.
Many thanks Thomas for stopping by. I appreciate you.
Very inspirational Cassie. 😉👍
Thank you so much AP. Inspired by a favourite piece of classical music. Pleased you gave it a thumbs up. Have a. great day.
Fly away Cassie I will be there as well.
Andy
Thank you Andy. The music will do that y to you 🙂
Very nice. Felt swept up in the words.
Thank you John for a lovely review. I appreciate you. Have a good weekend.
Chris
jeez, even if we were not in the same corner, it would be impossible not to pause and pay my respects .. this is another fine example of why I first fell in love with poetry Cassie .. Neville
Good to be in the same corner and even better that we fell in love with poetry. Thank you Neville for being here. 💜
then moves slowly upwards
imitating a lark, the messenger
of a brand new morning
And what an uplifting symbolism you brought my morning! Both the bow and the lark pointed me to a beautiful English countryside. Best.
The classical music which inspired this piece is truly magnificent. I wrote this poem while listening and watching the video of the English countryside. Pleased you found it uplifting and I thank you so much for your visit and review. Have a good weekend.
beautiful cassie, transcendent,
and comforting
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Reynaldo. Have a beautiful day.
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