While there was a dream, it did seem
we were held together with cloud tethers
welding a strong beam
of sunshine in dark or stormy weathers
Torn promises, time's pockets robbed
behind broken rainbows lay in the path
stones sighed, clouds sobbed
watering fields of sprouting wrath
Kiss of the past in cement cast
Night's bloody hemorrhages expose the pallid face of day
clouds wispy knot tied tight and fast
until buried moonbeams under foot do lay
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
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Very emotive words soren.
Andy
Thanks Andy appreciate the read and kind words.
Good write SB.
Thanks Orchi
Amazing how you can articulate this with such elegant visions of the inevitable. sorrenbarret you brought a tear to my eye, the struggle and challenges and in the end the peace at least knowing pain and suffering is finished. That is my interpretation of this write. 🌹 Kudos in every way.
So appreciate your too gracious words Teddy. You are so kind.
The contrast between light and darkness adds depth to the emotional landscape. Well done!
Thank you so much for your review and most generous words of encouragement.
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