My raven came to visit my dream
from the side of my bed
and whispered to me
when you awake
from nighttime’s slumberbash
put on a pretty dress
and paint mascara on your eyes lash
take a stroll on Richmond park
in your finest pair of shoes
the day is now your follower
and today she'll be with you
smile at the other souls
and just know this
others see you
others see you…
as you really are.
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Teddy.15 (
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A compelling poem, Teddy. Very intriguing. And Happy Friday! 🙂
Ah yes I have a Raven we go back a while he comes to visit sometimes, thank you dear Tom, happy weekend my friend.🌹
Mascara and all!
Fabulous, Teddy!
Awe thank you dear Parisab mascara and all. ive had one of those weeks where I couldn't do anything right, I know we all have them so I took myself to Richmond which is my last home before I came overseas if only with my imagination. I actually have had a lovely day too. 🌹
Even more amusing, thanks for sharing, dear one!
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Ah dreams
Talking ravens and distant memories
So much to enjoy
Yet
All I wonder is the colour of your finest shoes
We see you as you really are Teddy
A much loved friend to all here
Keep smiling
It's infectious
Such kind words for my scribbles dear peto, thank you with all my heart, 💜
Powerful work Teddy. Very well crafted.
Thank you dear Thomas. 🌹
"the day is now your follower
and today she'll be with you"
Loved these lines that though simple seemed so much to belong to each other like pieces of a puzzle and one piece of logic that follows another. Very nice Teddy.
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret having had a few days where nothing went right I decided to put the positivity back into it, and it worked your stanza of choice is the one that I worked most hard on, thank you dear friend always see the inside. 🌹
And others can't help but smile at your own beauty. 🌹
Awe, thank you dearest A.P 🌹
Wonderful poem Teddy, I totally agree with your raven.
Andy
So very kind of you dear Andy. 🌹
if you ever feel like slumberbashing please give us a call ..
On a more serious note .. you really have excelled here Teddy the whole thing is from a poetry perspective rather special .. and the image that heads the page extraordinary .. Neville ..
ps .. have you still got my number .. 🌹
Slumberbash we shall lol I never need your number darling Nev, I know exactly where you are 🌹 thank you sweet friend. 🌹
Don't often do this, Teddy - quote from the poem above , but here
'the day is now your follower
and today she'll be with you'
somehow clicked and I will see the day slightly differently in future...
PS You will get 'slumberbash' into the dictionary yet....... 😊
Dear Dave, those lines mean much in this a bit of a poem about how I felt this week, my day got so much better. I'm loving the word slumberbash and I'll probably slumberbash it to death, or at least to the point that you all complain lol thank you so much for your kind encouragement. 🌹
This poem feels like a gentle nudge from a caring friend, guiding you to embrace your authenticity and recognize the beauty in your everyday moments. It's a heartwarming reminder that you are seen and appreciated just as you are. Marvelous!
Thank you dear Cloie, so lovely to see another point of view on my work thank you . 🌹
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