The 8 year old’s whisper

Meera Mere



A little lively, a bit talkative and careless,

I used to be, she rasped.

“Why so silent now?”

The silence replied, words dismissed.

“Weren’t you always like this?” a voiced hissed,

For others maybe, she answered.

 

“Am I so silent? Is it irritating?” I hesitated.

A smile graced the 8-year-old's lips, pure and secure.

"No," she whispered, a beacon of innocence and grace,

“Silent or talkative, be yourself and live it”

She vanished, a fleeting wisp in time's storm.

 

  • Author: Meera Mere (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2024 01:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: I might have changed a little. A little more reserved, a little more silent but truly I am still that little anxious kid.
  • Category: Fable
  • Views: 21
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  • peto

    Meera
    Your word choices are excellent
    The last line in particular is very impressive
    Thoroughly enjoyed this one
    Loud and clear

    • Meera Mere

      Thank you so much Peto😊

    • Cloie

      I love this! The dialogue with your younger self was a nice touch. The ending's message about embracing your true self was powerful. Great job!

      • Meera Mere

        Thank you so much Cloie, Glad u liked it😊

      • rhmn_7

        “Silent or talkative, be yourself and live it”, yes and don't think about what others want you to be.

        • Meera Mere

          Indeed rhmn_7 Thank you so much for taking your time to read the poem😊

        • Thomas W Case

          Beautiful. Vulnerable and real. I love it.



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