mist rises
as newly birthed disc of sun
kisses easterly horizon’s cheek
promising heightened heat on a
sultry summer day
flimsy chariot clouds
fly past at rapid speed
in a blue sapphire sky
hurtling on a journey
to certain dissipation
we walk waist high
through scented spikes
of fragrant purple lavender
alive with a charm of worker bees
buzzing busily at the seams
he asks me if this
is a touch of heaven
i’m not sure i replied though when i die
if it echoes what we share here
then maybe dreams become reality
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Echoes of Lavender, your summer day has left me breathless with such beautiful imagery, painted from words into a masterpiece of poetry. So very special and of course your last lines so very clever. Absolutely a joy to read. 🌹
Dear Teddy, thank you for your kindness. Pleased you liked my poem. 🌹
Especially love the romantic imagery in the first stanza. Thank you for sharing, Cassie.
Thank you so much Kieron. I appreciate you stopping by.
Wonderful words Cassie, walking with lavender can be superb.
Andy
Thank you Andy for a lovely response. I appreciate you.
How amazing is that .. for me a most nostalgic ride .. and we all know don't we .. Echoes Don't Tell Lies .. Hope yours is a super sunny Sunday too Chris ..
Neville
Now that’s a lovely uplifting thought Neville. Thank you so much 🙂
I also don't know if this is heaven, but that what a very colorful and vivid depiction, great poem!
Many thank yous for a lovely response. Pleased you stopped by.
I'd call it Heaven and Earth. Beautiful written poem Cassie. 😊👍
Aw, thanks AP. The best of both. Pleased you stopped by.
Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with this piece. Loved it.
Such a welcome response. Thank you so much. Pleased you stopped by.
very beautiful,
Cassie,
heavenly,
Love the lavendar,
Like ya lit a candle
I like candles too. Many thanks for your time and visit Reynaldo.
Sweet have a nice night cassie
Thank you so much for stopping by. Morning here. Getting ready for a new day.
Cool, have a nice lavendar day cassie
I love how you combined nature and love!! Great poem!
Thank you so much Neilton for your nice comments. I appreciate you.
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