Echoes of Lavender

Cassie58

mist rises 

as newly birthed disc of sun 

kisses easterly horizon’s cheek 

promising heightened heat on a 

sultry summer day 

 

flimsy chariot clouds 

fly past at rapid speed 

in a blue sapphire sky 

hurtling on a journey 

to certain dissipation 

 

we walk waist high 

through scented spikes 

of fragrant purple lavender 

alive with a charm of  worker bees 

buzzing busily at the seams 

 

he asks me if this 

is a touch of heaven 

i’m not sure i replied though when i die 

if it echoes what we share here 

then maybe dreams become reality 

 

  • Author: Cassie58 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2024 08:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    Echoes of Lavender, your summer day has left me breathless with such beautiful imagery, painted from words into a masterpiece of poetry. So very special and of course your last lines so very clever. Absolutely a joy to read. 🌹

    • Cassie58

      Dear Teddy, thank you for your kindness. Pleased you liked my poem. 🌹

    • Kieron

      Especially love the romantic imagery in the first stanza. Thank you for sharing, Cassie.

      • Cassie58

        Thank you so much Kieron. I appreciate you stopping by.

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful words Cassie, walking with lavender can be superb.

        Andy

        • Cassie58

          Thank you Andy for a lovely response. I appreciate you.

        • Neville



          How amazing is that .. for me a most nostalgic ride .. and we all know don't we .. Echoes Don't Tell Lies .. Hope yours is a super sunny Sunday too Chris ..

          Neville

          • Cassie58

            Now that’s a lovely uplifting thought Neville. Thank you so much 🙂

          • rhmn_7

            I also don't know if this is heaven, but that what a very colorful and vivid depiction, great poem!

            • Cassie58

              Many thank yous for a lovely response. Pleased you stopped by.

            • sorenbarrett

              Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with this piece. Loved it.

              • Cassie58

                Such a welcome response. Thank you so much. Pleased you stopped by.

              • Reynaldo Casison

                very beautiful,
                Cassie,
                heavenly,
                Love the lavendar,
                Like ya lit a candle

              • Cassie58

                I like candles too. Many thanks for your time and visit Reynaldo.

              • Reynaldo Casison

                Sweet have a nice night cassie

                • Cassie58

                  Thank you so much for stopping by. Morning here. Getting ready for a new day.

                  • Reynaldo Casison

                    Cool, have a nice lavendar day cassie

                  • Neilton

                    I love how you combined nature and love!! Great poem!

                    • Cassie58

                      Thank you so much Neilton for your nice comments. I appreciate you.



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